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Kim Haase commented on DERBY-711:
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Looks great, Bryan -- thanks.
One suggestion -- you could simplify the second sentence (and avoid a dangling
participle and passive voice):
"You can move Derby databases from machine to machine without modifying the
data."
> The documentation should explain that Derby database files are
> platform-independent
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>
> Key: DERBY-711
> URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-711
> Project: Derby
> Issue Type: Improvement
> Components: Documentation
> Affects Versions: 10.1.2.1
> Reporter: Jean T. Anderson
> Assignee: Bryan Pendleton
> Priority: Minor
> Attachments: cgsintro.html, docs.diff
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> Somehow the fact that Derby database files are platform independent slipped
> making it into the documentation. Here's a relevant post:
> http://mail-archives.apache.org/mod_mbox/db-derby-user/200511.mbox/%[email protected]%3e
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