Hi, thanks for preparing the release notes, Rick! Some notes
- title: Derby -> Apache Derby. Same in first line in overview. - new features, bullet one: "privileges" and "permissions" are both used in the same sentence. Choose one form, I suggest privileges. Bullet five: "remote clients" -> Applications using the Derby network client driver - unicode -> Unicode - ascii -> ASCII - bug fixes: should we include Test category bugs at all? I am not sure that is interesting to end users. - issues: DERBY-4786: It is a big confusing that we speak of Derby 10.4 and higher, when one would expect to see 10.7. I guess this is because we have backported it... Note required? DERBY-4777: The wording implies that user could rely on particular SQL states from Derby. In general, I believed we make no such guarantees. If that is still the case, a caveat is in order, I think. E.g. ".... in Client mode, 'ERROR 42X30' should be expected." DERBY-4577: "Summary of change" is logically backwards: It states that the changes is that "An update statement will fail with..." The real change is "On a new database, an UPDATE statement will no longer ever give "nospc.U". On an old database, after calling SYSCS_COMPRESS_TABLE on it, an UPDATE statement will no longer ever give "nospc.U"... The problem applies for section "Symptoms seen..". insures -> ensures Thanks, Dag
