Hi Drew, Marc, all
drew schrieb:
Hi,
Well over an early coffee, I went ahead and merged Italo's comments into
Marc's latest on the wiki, and added one more graphic - thought maybe an
actual logo, the contemporary style might be nice, and it balances out
the columns when opened wide, IMO.
So draft 3 for the show specific pamphlet:
http://baseanswers.com/libo/LibOPamphlet_scale_9x_b.pdf
It's hard to keep in pace with you guys - great work!
From my POV this pamphlet fits very well with the Branding Guidelines,
so no need to change it.
Nevertheless some thoughts...
(you know me - can't admit that some work is just perfect ;-) )
You added the Web and Chart icons to the graphic on the second page.
Why did you leave out Macro?
I would not suggest to promote Writer/Web actively - it has not been
worked on for years and I didn't hear any positive reaction during the
same time.
The Base icon on page 1 seems to be positioned slightly too low -
leading to a fifth indented line, while all the other app's show four of
them.
I don't know if you want to mention Chart on the first page too -
perhaps a problem of space.
Speaking of "six feature-rich applications" directly below an image
showing nine document icons looks a bit strange to me.
Perhaps an image showing the 6 applications in a star-like positioning
indicating their inter-relationship might be an idea...
And one point to the text content: Under "The LibreOffice Project" (as
"project" is a task leading to an end in my understanding I'd prefer
"Community") there is more than twice as much text about the product as
about the community - in fact, invitation to join us is the weakest
position in the entire pamphlet IMHO (of course it's user-related, but
showing them a way to be involved in a relevant way - possibly leading
to better inclusion of their interests in community and product - might
be important too).
As said - no reason to modify the pamphlet: Just some input for the case
you want to keep on working on it ...
Best regards
Bernhard
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