Hi Alex,

Overall: great. I like the coloured accent very much.

There are a couple things, though:

#1 Would you mind removing the small-caps from the headlines? These
aren't font-provided small caps, but forced ones whose proportions
differ from what a typographer would provide with a font (i. e. their
lines are two thin for the given font size) – long story short,
typographers would hate us for doing this in our defaults
#2 The difference between Heading 1 and Heading 2 font size is too
large – make Heading 2 and 3 larger, please
#3 Heading and Heading 1 have some marginal difference in appearance,
although it looks like there should be none at all
#4 Looking at the distance (kerning) between the "a" and the "d" in
"Heading 1," it seems the DejaVu Light font is not quite ready for
primetime, can you revert to normal DejaVu (which looks better)?
#5 Heading 4 to 10 should surely have larger font sizes (Heading 6 has
a 9pt font size, much smaller than the body text!)
#6 Signature uses FreeSans, not DejaVu/Liberation Serif

Hope that helps,

Astron.

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