Hi all, thanks Jean-Francois for your comments. I tried to play with them. Now I have four versions ;-)
1. Playing with the comments: https://nextcloud.documentfoundation.org/s/ywLZze9iCsEL8PS 2. Date on the left side (not my ) https://nextcloud.documentfoundation.org/s/4ERmDA6fqrkzxE3 3. Date in the middle and part of it in green (doesn't really work optically, if the date is on the right side) https://nextcloud.documentfoundation.org/s/j3psRQpoedER2LP 4. get off the date completely to get breath (don't know where to put it in this version): https://nextcloud.documentfoundation.org/s/Q4SLYzJxTNgLSsN And here are the odgs: 1. https://nextcloud.documentfoundation.org/s/JqKJ8MYmQnNLGC6 2. https://nextcloud.documentfoundation.org/s/F2qmCxGNZHQZ9md 3. https://nextcloud.documentfoundation.org/s/YBBoQGtHkPPjaK9 4. https://nextcloud.documentfoundation.org/s/DZ3QPd9QsHsH3e9 Am 04.08.2018 um 22:51 schrieb Jean-Francois Nifenecker: > Hello, > > Le 04/08/2018 à 11:43, K-J LibreOffice a écrit : >> >> Try to make both: >> https://nextcloud.documentfoundation.org/s/szx2RS5rd57tX4e >> > > Nice one, but I'd prefer no colon after "presents", the 6.1 to be more > prominent and with the "1" closer to the dot (kerning is awful). > > And yes, "LibreOffice" is smallish. > > So, to summarize: > -- increase "LibreOffice" font size a little > -- consequently, move the "AMA meets" line slightly down to leave both > line "breathe" > -- increase the version number font size > -- move the "1" to the left > > Anyway, nice job. > > > Greetings from -- Grüße k-j Member of TheDocumentFoundation https://www.documentfoundation.org/governance/members/ https://de.libreoffice.org https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/ -- To unsubscribe e-mail to: [email protected] Problems? https://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ Posting guidelines + more: https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: https://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/design/ Privacy Policy: https://www.documentfoundation.org/privacy
