Illustrations are fine and Ikos sketches look great, but we need to have a better focus on what illustrations convey. The current "Intro" as seen here https://snowdrift.coop/p/snowdrift/w/en/intro isn't an intro to snowdrift.coop, it is more a vision mixed with explanations of principles. And it is too long.
So replicating material in a new look seems ineffective. The project has evolved and now we need to adjust to the current situation; we need to start addressing actual users in their individual situation. For me that also means we should treat topics more seperately; What are digital goods? What does "FLO" and "proprietary" mean? What is the Snowdrift Dilemma? What is the Network effect? What is a coop? ...are different questions that might need to be raised and answered at different stages of user interaction. In a sum they certainly give valuable context to where snowdrift is coming from and where it aims to go. It does not seem to be what we primarily need, though. What does one need to grasp before signing up? What does one need to generally understand what SD is? What does one need to know to become good snowdrifters? I think depending on the answers to those questions we will get similar, but ultimately better fitting visual stories. and shorter ones. Cheers, Robert
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