** Changed in: gnome-power
       Status: New => Expired

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Title:
  gpm manual errors: 8.2 & 8.6

Status in Gnome Powermanager:
  Expired
Status in “gnome-power-manager” package in Ubuntu:
  Triaged

Bug description:
  Binary package hint: ubuntu-docs

  8.2 - The caution/warning section
  "You still use a small amount of battery power whilst suspended, so is not 
recommended for the low power action. If you remove AC power on a desktop, or 
run out of battery power on a laptop then you will lose your work."

  Should be:
  ...so is not recommended for the low or critical power actions. ...

  Reasoning: I shouldn't use it for low, but I can for critical?
  Clarity.

  
  8.6 - Title
  "Why does not my IBM laptop have the brightness sliders in Power Preferences?"

  Should be:
  Why doesn't Power Preferences show the brightness sliders for my IBM laptop?

  Reasoning: The laptop doesn't "have" possession of the slider, power
  prefs does. Furthermore, "why does not <noun>" is not correct grammar,
  it is "why does <noun> not"; however, when using it as a contraction
  it is usually accepted, as in my correction.

  Would also need changed in the index, at the top.

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