Reinhard Poetz said the following on 26/10/07 18:34:
Grzegorz Kossakowski wrote:
BTW. When can we expect new release officialy announced?
I've started to work on it together with a "What's new in Cocoon 2.2"
page and hope to finish it this weekend.
Sorry to reply so late, I'm currently out of internet connection at
home. :-(
Anyway, re 141.html:
- You state that 'Apache Cocoon is a Spring-based framework'. Shouldn't
that be 'Since version 2.2 Apache Cocoon is a Spring-based framework'
because earlier versions are not.
- A block is the unit of modularization
(in comparison: Eclipse uses the term plugins, OSGi bundles) in Cocoon.
Better: A block is the unit of modularization in Cocoon
(in comparison: Eclipse uses the term plugins, OSGi uses bundles).
Note: is that the intention: OSGi uses bundles? If not, please correct.
- Everything that goes beyond that what Cocoon provides in...
Remove the second 'that'.
- A block can provide +THE+ following features:
(add 'the')
- add commas after each list item and a dot after the last item.
- A block is packaged as +A+ Java archive (jar)
(add 'a')
- (Cocoon Configuration) It's current implementation...
should be: Its current implementation...
- (Cocoon database)
Direct usage of releational databases
should be: relational
- (Cocoon Flow)
...s for building in...
you might as well remove the second space between 'for' and 'building'
- (Cocoon Mail)
Sitemap components to send mails
I'd prefer: emails.
- (Cocoon Maven plugin)
paching the web.xml at deployment time.
should be: patching....
Re 1420.html:
I've gone in and added a few minor changes myself. I'm not sure of the
following:
- General, last list item: what about it? Is it available, is it
configurable. Please complete the sentence.
Hope this helps.
Bye, Helma
