On 10 Feb 2014, at 21:44, Malini Das <[email protected]> wrote: > On 2/10/2014, 9:39 AM, Chris Mills wrote: >> Hi all, >> >> Could I get someone to do me a quick technical review on the following >> article set? >> >> https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/Firefox_OS/Security/Debugging_and_security_testing >> >> Particularly the following section needs some details added, as it’s still >> TBD. >> >> https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/Firefox_OS/Security/Testing_in_a_privileged_context#Windows >> >> They are not very long, so looking through should be pretty quick. >> >> Many thanks in advance! >> >> Chris Mills >> Senior tech writer || Mozilla >> developer.mozilla.org || MDN >> [email protected] || @chrisdavidmills >> >> >> > At the time of reading this, the "flavor of nightly build (Linux, Mac OS, > Windows)" limk pointed to > http://ftp.mozilla.org/pub/mozilla.org/b2g/nightly/latest-mozilla-b2g18/ > which may not be what you want for *nightlies*. That would be > ftp://ftp.mozilla.org/pub/b2g/nightly/latest-mozilla-central/. > > And to be pedantic, "Marionette: A JavaScript debugging shell for Firefox OS" > is inaccurate. Marionette is an automation driver, allowing you access to > automate actions in chrome and content and to inject javascript. The shell > you're using is built on top of marionette. I'd rewrite that as "Getting a > debugging shell for Firefox OS", then continue to describe the process of > setting up the shell. > > I'd also change "Marionette is based on the Selenium/WebDriver API, and > provides a debugging shell to automate Firefox OS testing." to something like > "Marionette is based on the Selenium/WebDriver API, and provides the basis > for the debugging shell we use to automate Firefox OS testing." > > This will help mitigate any bugs, and help people get a better understanding > of why they're installing what they're installing:) > > Furthermore, if these are nightly builds, they don't need to modify the > prefs.js stuff. It's set up to work when you start up b2g, so you can remove > those instructions.
Thanks for the help Malini - I’ve made your changes as suggested. _______________________________________________ dev-b2g mailing list [email protected] https://lists.mozilla.org/listinfo/dev-b2g
