+cc dev-fxacct because there's nothing secret here.

This is great! Two small nits:

Without additional context, "yet" doesn't provide any value. If there
are imminent plans to make Sync a full backup service and we can
link to an article explaining the coming changes, sure.

I'd also ditch "own" in "your own devices" - "your devices"
says the same thing.

Do you want me to put together a PR with these changes this week,
or do you think we'll do another round or two?

Shane


On Thu, Jun 8, 2017 at 6:22 PM, Alex Davis <[email protected]> wrote:

> Small edits added in bold:
>
> The Sync service isn’t a permanent backup *yet*, it’s simply a secure way
> to transfer saved bookmarks, history and passwords between your own
> devices. You should install Firefox and sync at least two devices to
> protect against losing your data if *you lose or replace a device, or
> forget your login.*
>
> Explanation:
> - Adding "yet" means we are working to make it better.
> - Forgetting password and resetting password are the same thing so... I
> thought it best to replace one of the two with lost/replaced device which
> could also result in lost data.
>
> Thoughts?
>
> --
> Alex Davis // Mountain View
> Product Manager // FxA & Sync
> (415) 769-9247
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>
> On Thu, Jun 8, 2017 at 6:37 AM, Ryan Feeley <[email protected]> wrote:
>
>> and for the header we can use "Why sync multiple devices?"
>>
>> On Wed, Jun 7, 2017 at 7:38 PM, Ryan Feeley <[email protected]> wrote:
>>
>>> Got it! What do you think? (Body)
>>>
>>> The Sync service isn’t a permanent backup, it’s simply a secure way to
>>> transfer saved bookmarks, history and passwords between your own devices.
>>> You should install Firefox and sync at least two devices to protect against
>>> losing your data if you forget your login or reset your password.
>>>
>>>
>>>
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