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Antti Hietala updated MAGNOLIA-3512:
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    Attachment: QuickstartPage.html

Revised wording. Added link to Technical Guide ("learn more..."). Still plagued 
with Supersonic vs STK term conflict since target documentation pages talk 
about STK. HTML attached.

> Improve wording of quickstart page
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>                 Key: MAGNOLIA-3512
>                 URL: http://jira.magnolia-cms.com/browse/MAGNOLIA-3512
>             Project: Magnolia
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: admininterface
>            Reporter: Grégory Joseph
>            Assignee: Philipp Bärfuss
>             Fix For: 5.0
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>         Attachments: QuickstartPage.html, Screen shot 2011-01-14 at 
> 13.44.28.png
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> The quickstart page's text could be improved. One reason I "ticked" on it 
> just now is the punctuation, using dashes and commas, which didn't play well 
> with my browser's end of line policies. See attached screenshots.

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