Looks pretty good to me! I might do a little rewording to make it a little less marketing-sounding, e.g.:

CURRENT:
AsterixDB is a full-function BDMS (Big Data Management System) with a rich feature set that distinguishes it from pretty much any other Big Data platform that's out and available today. We believe that its feature set makes it well-suited to modern needs such as web data warehousing and social data storage and analysis.

NEW:
AsterixDB is a BDMS (Big Data Management System) with a rich feature set that sets it apart from other Big Data platforms. Its feature set makes it well-suited to modern needs such as web data warehousing and social data storage and analysis.



On 5/11/15 1:22 PM, Ian Maxon wrote:
Any objections? If not I am going to re-apply Till's +2 and merge this
today.

- Ian

On Fri, May 8, 2015 at 1:19 PM, Ian Maxon <[email protected]> wrote:

As discussed in the meeting, here is the change proposal for the Github
readme for the project. https://asterix-gerrit.ics.uci.edu/#/c/256/ .
Please feel free to add comments, I'm posting it here in lieu of adding
absolutely everyone to the review.

Thanks,
- Ian


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