You asked for comments so here goes (I do not know C# or .NET)
On page http://www.apache.org/~hammett/avalondotnet/index.html - A spelling error "Architeture" is spelt "Architecture" (Missing the "c"). - grammar error "The Avalon version for .Net is not yet public available. " - make "public" "publically" - public is a noun publically is an ad On the page http://www.apache.org/~hammett/articles/dotnettransactions.html - Normally an application which deals with business logic soon or later will need transactions. I would reword this as "Sooner or later an application that deals with business logic will need transaction support" Note the subtle difference between the word "which" and "that" - "which" starts a phrase and is delimited by commas - "that" does not required the commas. Normally which is used when the thought being expressed is less connected to the containing sentence - an ancilliary thing. - spelling error "obvios:" "obvious" - Thats allows you to create COM+ components - try "That allows you to" - "If that is ok to you please stop reading this right now" - This sentence does not flow well and I am not sure what you mean by it. The sentence itself did not seem to relate with what followed. On the http://www.apache.org/~hammett/articles/jta.html "Wops" is actually spelt "Whoops". I assume that I did not this on one of your posts. "Wops" is (amoungst other meanings) is a terminate for ethnic eg Italian, Greek, Spanish - but I do not believe that anyone would really think you meant this mistake. "hammett" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> on 10/10/2003 02:36:48 Please respond to "Avalon Developers List" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> To: [EMAIL PROTECTED] cc: [EMAIL PROTECTED] Subject: Avalon.Net - articles, api docs and architecture info Gentleman, Please refer to http://www.apache.org/~hammett/avalondotnet/index.html for a lot of Avalon.Net information (and english errors) Comments are welcome! hammett --- Acabe com aquelas janelinhas que pulam na sua tela. AntiPop-up UOL - � gr�tis! http://antipopup.uol.com.br --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] For additional commands, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] **************************************************************** NOTICE - This message is intended only for the use of the addressee named above and may contain privileged and confidential information. If you are not the intended recipient of this message you are hereby notified that you must not disseminate, copy or take any action based upon it. If you received this message in error please notify HIC immediately. Any views expressed in this message are those of the individual sender, except where the sender specifically states them to be the views of HIC. **************************************************************** --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] For additional commands, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
