1. I am slightly inclined for black lines 2. I have two pieces of feedback: - It feels like the head and the eyes on this design are less elongated. I think I liked the more oval-like eyes from previous designs. (And the head also became less oval-like?, maybe?) - I like the white hand tips and stripes in the body from slide 22 of your previous deck. These lines are very easy to draw but I think they make the Firefly less flat.
That's it from me! Thanks Julian, it's looking really good. Best -P. On Wed, Mar 25, 2020 at 10:00 PM Kenneth Knowles <k...@apache.org> wrote: > I assume that when this bug moves fast the tail will leave a cool light > trail. > > Kenn > > On Wed, Mar 25, 2020 at 5:45 PM Daniel Oliveira <danolive...@google.com> > wrote: > >> 1. Do you prefer red or black colored line art? >> >> >> Red. >> >> >>> 2. Do you have any additional feedback about the mascot's shape or >>> features? >> >> >> Love the new tail and new shadows. >> >> I like the wings better with color, but they still feel a bit dull to me. >> I feel they would be improved by having more vibrant colors near the tips, >> and possibly by going with more yellow-ish colors closer to the Beam logo. >> Compare with the wings from slide 10 of your previous deck >> <https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1cEydTxQcsTJES_JCRvC_xgK7HMCIfnxmuawd7x2Bk_o/edit#slide=id.g81622cb375_0_78>, >> which I like much better. Having the more vibrant color near the tips of >> the wings also pairs well with the new tail, which does the same thing with >> its yellow light. >> >> On Wed, Mar 25, 2020 at 12:11 PM Julian Bruno <juliangbr...@gmail.com> >> wrote: >> >>> Hello Apache Beam Community, >>> >>> Together with Aizhamal and her team, we have been working on the design >>> of the Apache Beam mascot. >>> >>> We now need input from the community to continue moving forward with the >>> design. Please share your input no later than Friday, March 27, at noon >>> Pacific Time. Below you will find a link to the presentation of the work >>> process and we are eager to know what you think of the current design [1]. >>> >>> Our questions to you: >>> >>> 1. Do you prefer red or black colored line art? >>> >>> 2. Do you have any additional feedback about the mascot's shape or >>> features? >>> >>> Please reply inline, so it is clear what exactly you are referring to. The >>> vote and input phase will be open until Friday, March 27, at 12 pm Pacific >>> Time. We will incorporate the feedback to the next design iteration of >>> the mascot. >>> >>> Thank you, >>> >>> >>> Julian Bruno // Visual Artist & Graphic Designer >>> (510) 367-0551 / SF Bay Area, CA >>> www.instagram.com/julbro.art >>> >>> [1] >>> >>> Mascot Weekly Update - 3/25 >>> <https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1ks9dOA-qFH1cNku8_46TppxsfKWJn8Gb94Vi5MtnQD0/edit?usp=drive_web> >>> >>> >>> >>> ᐧ >>> >>
