infrastation commented on a change in pull request #287: proofreading round 1 URL: https://github.com/apache/brooklyn-docs/pull/287#discussion_r311038332
########## File path: guide/blueprints/advanced-example.md ########## @@ -36,10 +36,10 @@ There are four blueprints that make up this application. Each of them are used t #### Running the example First, add all four blueprints to the Brooklyn Catalog. This can be done by going to the "Catalog" module, then clicking the -buttom "Upload to catalog" and selecting the above blueprints (or drag-and-drop them) Once this is done, search for an +button "Upload to catalog" and selecting the above blueprints (or drag-and-drop them). Alternatively, use the `br` Brooklyn +command line tool and add the files with `br catalog add`. Once this is done, search for an Review comment: The "Running the example" section describes two steps: 1. add the provided bundles to the catalog (three possible ways to do) 2. deploy one of the added bundles (two possible ways to do) The sentence that starts "Alternatively..." belongs to the first step, but is located after the second step, so the change just moves it to where it belongs. As a side note, some of the suggested ways of doing this do not currently work, but this change does not address that. Would it make more sense to split the paragraph into two? ---------------------------------------------------------------- This is an automated message from the Apache Git Service. To respond to the message, please log on to GitHub and use the URL above to go to the specific comment. For queries about this service, please contact Infrastructure at: [email protected] With regards, Apache Git Services
