Hi Glen You got the care for details :) That is good.
You may want to check out the other README.txt files for the examples. I am sure they also have grammar errors etc. And some of the examples have part of their README.txt copied to their wiki page under http://camel.apache.org/examples So you may want to fix those errors there as well. We love contributions, so patches is of course welcome On Wed, Dec 28, 2011 at 4:36 PM, Glen Mazza <gma...@talend.com> wrote: > Sorry, Claus, anything above 10 grammar errors activates the harsh, > unforgiving veto buzzer. :) > > On 12/28/2011 07:38 AM, davscl...@apache.org wrote: > > Modified: camel/trunk/examples/camel-example-loadbalancing/README.txt > URL:http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/camel/trunk/examples/camel-example-loadbalancing/README.txt?rev=1225170&r1=1225169&r2=1225170&view=diff > ============================================================================== > --- camel/trunk/examples/camel-example-loadbalancing/README.txt (original) > +++ camel/trunk/examples/camel-example-loadbalancing/README.txt Wed Dec 28 > 12:38:53 2011 > > >> +This example show how you can easily use the camel-mina component to >> design a solution > > This example shows , Camel-MINA > >> +allowing to distribute message workload on several servers. > > allowing for distributing... onto several servers > >> +These servers are simple TCP/IP servers created by the Apache MINA >> framework and running in > > ...and run in... > >> +separate JVMs. The load balancer pattern of Camel which is used top of >> them allows to > > > ...allows for >> >> +send in a Round Robin model mode the messages created from a camel Bean >> component > > sending in (no "a") Round Robin mode (no "model") the messages... Camel... > >> +respectively to each server running on localhost:9991 and localhost:9992. > > > alternately between each server... >> >> + >> +The demo starts when every 5th seconds, a Report object is created from >> the camel load balancer server. > > every *5* seconds (or every 5th *second*), created *by* the *Camel*... > >> +This object is send by the camel load balancer to a MINA server and >> object is serialized. > > > This object is *sent* by the *Camel* load balancer to a MINA server where it > is serialized. > >> +One of the two MINA servers (localhost:9991 and localhost:9992) receives >> the object and enrich the > > *enriches* > >> message >> +by setting the field reply of the Report object. The reply is send back >> by the MINA server to the > > *sent* back > >> client, >> +which then logs the reply on the console. > > > > -- > Glen Mazza > Talend Community Coders > http://coders.talend.com > blog: http://www.jroller.com/gmazza > -- Claus Ibsen ----------------- FuseSource Email: cib...@fusesource.com Web: http://fusesource.com Twitter: davsclaus, fusenews Blog: http://davsclaus.blogspot.com/ Author of Camel in Action: http://www.manning.com/ibsen/