Hi Glen

You got the care for details :) That is good.

You may want to check out the other README.txt files for the examples.
I am sure they also have grammar errors etc.

And some of the examples have part of their README.txt copied to their
wiki page under
http://camel.apache.org/examples

So you may want to fix those errors there as well.

We love contributions, so patches is of course welcome



On Wed, Dec 28, 2011 at 4:36 PM, Glen Mazza <gma...@talend.com> wrote:
> Sorry, Claus, anything above 10 grammar errors activates the harsh,
> unforgiving veto buzzer.  :)
>
> On 12/28/2011 07:38 AM, davscl...@apache.org wrote:
>
> Modified: camel/trunk/examples/camel-example-loadbalancing/README.txt
> URL:http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/camel/trunk/examples/camel-example-loadbalancing/README.txt?rev=1225170&r1=1225169&r2=1225170&view=diff
> ==============================================================================
> --- camel/trunk/examples/camel-example-loadbalancing/README.txt (original)
> +++ camel/trunk/examples/camel-example-loadbalancing/README.txt Wed Dec 28
> 12:38:53 2011
>
>
>> +This example show how you can easily use the camel-mina component to
>> design a solution
>
> This example shows , Camel-MINA
>
>> +allowing to distribute message workload on several servers.
>
> allowing for distributing...    onto several servers
>
>> +These servers are simple TCP/IP servers created by the Apache MINA
>> framework and running in
>
> ...and run in...
>
>> +separate JVMs. The load balancer pattern of Camel which is used top of
>> them allows to
>
>
> ...allows for
>>
>> +send in a Round Robin model mode the messages created from a camel Bean
>> component
>
> sending in (no "a") Round Robin mode (no "model") the messages...  Camel...
>
>> +respectively to each server running on localhost:9991 and localhost:9992.
>
>
> alternately between each server...
>>
>> +
>> +The demo starts when every 5th seconds, a Report object is created from
>> the camel load balancer server.
>
> every *5* seconds (or every 5th *second*), created *by* the *Camel*...
>
>> +This object is send by the camel load balancer to a MINA server and
>> object is serialized.
>
>
> This object is *sent* by the *Camel* load balancer to a MINA server where it
> is serialized.
>
>> +One of the two MINA servers (localhost:9991 and localhost:9992) receives
>> the object and enrich the
>
> *enriches*
>
>> message
>> +by setting the field reply of the Report object. The reply is send back
>> by the MINA server to the
>
> *sent* back
>
>> client,
>> +which then logs the reply on the console.
>
>
>
> --
> Glen Mazza
> Talend Community Coders
> http://coders.talend.com
> blog: http://www.jroller.com/gmazza
>



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