GitHub user nichmoore opened a pull request:
https://github.com/apache/camel/pull/2119
FUSEDOC-2096 - Update links and correct grammar
I've amended some of the grammar.
The section called 'Using the JPA based idempotent repository' particularly
needs to be looked at because:
- The instructions were not clear. The language was very strange and at
times incomprehensible. I've rewritten it as best as I can but it needs a
review.
- It seemed that assumptions were made about the level of prior knowledge
as far as this subject goes. A straw poll of developers here shows that they
know the concept, but not necessarily that terminology.
- The examples were missing. Asciidoc doesn't seem to handle snippets at
all.
You can merge this pull request into a Git repository by running:
$ git pull https://github.com/nichmoore/camel FUSEDOC-2096
Alternatively you can review and apply these changes as the patch at:
https://github.com/apache/camel/pull/2119.patch
To close this pull request, make a commit to your master/trunk branch
with (at least) the following in the commit message:
This closes #2119
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commit 720e6235351f37fe049bfcda31ef69bd0712c31a
Author: nmoore <[email protected]>
Date: 2017-11-24T00:57:10Z
FUSEDOC-2096 - Update links and correct grammar
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