DaanHoogland commented on code in PR #356:
URL: 
https://github.com/apache/cloudstack-documentation/pull/356#discussion_r1455410276


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source/adminguide/virtual_machines/importing_unmanaging_vms.rst:
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@@ -39,37 +49,37 @@ Importing Unmanaged Instances
 Use Cases and General Usage
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
-The ability to import Instances allows Cloud operators (both public and 
private) to onboard new tenants simply and quickly,
-with the minimum amount disk IO. But also can be used in disaster recovery 
scenarios at remote sites (if storage is
-replicated) and in the recreation of Instances which have been backed up (part 
of the code is indeed used in
-CloudStack's Backup and Recovery feature).
+The ability to import Instances allows Cloud operators to onboard new tenants 
simply and quickly,
+with the minimum amount of disk IO. It can also be used in disaster recovery 
scenarios at remote sites (if storage is
+replicated).
 
-The most complex part of importing Instances is the mapping of an unmanaged 
Instance's Networks to CloudStack Networks.  As an operator
-could be importing tens or even hundreds of Instances, a UI for this feature 
has not been created as yet.
+The most complex part of importing Instances is the mapping of an unmanaged 
Instance's Networks (on the hypervisor level) to CloudStack Networks, as an 
operator
+could be importing tens or even hundreds of Instances.
 
-If the 'destination' Network VLAN(s) and the requested service offerings match 
the existing Instance, then the Instance can be
-imported whilst it is running. If the VLANs or service offerings do not match, 
then the Instance to be imported must be stopped.
-Once the Instance has been added to CloudStack, starting it through CloudStack 
will alter the Instances settings in line with
-those set in the CloudStack DB.
+If the 'destination' Network's VLAN(s) and the requested service offerings 
match the existing VLAN and the CPU/RAM profile of the Instance on the 
hypervisor level, then the Instance can be
+imported while it is running. If the VLANs or service offerings do not match, 
then the Instance to be imported must be stopped.
+Once the Instance has been added to CloudStack, starting it through CloudStack 
will alter the Instance's settings on the hypervisor in line with
+those set in the CloudStack DB (e.g. the Instance might be moved to a 
different Port Group on vSwitch/dvSwitch, with the corresponding VLAN)
 
 To import Instances, it is imagined that a Cloud Provider will:
 
-#. List all of the existing Networks which the Instances to be imported are on.
-#. Create corresponding Networks in CloudStack
+#. List/get familiar all of the existing Networks on which the Instances to be 
imported are on.

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   #. List/get familiar with all of the existing Networks on which the 
Instances to be imported are on.
   ```



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