GabrielBrascher commented on a change in pull request #192:
URL:
https://github.com/apache/cloudstack-documentation/pull/192#discussion_r585286376
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File path: source/installguide/management-server/_nfs.rst
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@@ -237,12 +237,34 @@ operating system version.
#. Log back in to the hypervisor host and try to mount the /export
directories. For example, substitute your own management server
name:
-
- .. parsed-literal::
-
- mkdir /primary
- mount -t nfs <management-server-name>:/export/primary
- umount /primary
- mkdir /secondary
- mount -t nfs <management-server-name>:/export/secondary
- umount /secondary
+
+ #. Creat directories for testing.
Review comment:
`Creat` -> `Create`
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File path: source/installguide/management-server/_database.rst
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@@ -22,8 +22,9 @@ node, you can install the MySQL server locally. For an
installation that
has multiple management server nodes, we assume the MySQL database also
runs on a separate node.
-CloudStack has been tested with MySQL 5.1 and 5.5. These versions are
-included in RHEL/CentOS and Ubuntu.
+CloudStack has been tested with MySQL 5.1 ,5.5 and 8.0. The versions 5.1
+and 5.5 are included in RHEL/CentOS and Ubuntu.
+For MySQL 8.0 please refer to the offical / community repositories of the
product..
Review comment:
Remove duplicated `..` at the end.
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File path: source/installguide/management-server/_database.rst
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@@ -22,8 +22,9 @@ node, you can install the MySQL server locally. For an
installation that
has multiple management server nodes, we assume the MySQL database also
runs on a separate node.
-CloudStack has been tested with MySQL 5.1 and 5.5. These versions are
-included in RHEL/CentOS and Ubuntu.
+CloudStack has been tested with MySQL 5.1 ,5.5 and 8.0. The versions 5.1
Review comment:
Minnor formatation of the comma: `MySQL 5.1 ,5.5 and 8.0.` -> `MySQL
5.1, 5.5 and 8.0.`
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File path: source/installguide/hypervisor/kvm.rst
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@@ -289,15 +289,7 @@ cloudstack-agent and should already be installed.
#. Turning on "listen\_tcp" in libvirtd.conf is not enough, we have to
change the parameters as well:
- On RHEL or CentOS modify ``/etc/sysconfig/libvirtd``:
-
- Uncomment the following line:
-
- .. parsed-literal::
-
- #LIBVIRTD_ARGS="--listen"
-
- On Ubuntu 14.04: modify ``/etc/default/libvirt-bin``
+ On Ubuntu 14.04: modify ``/etc/default/libvirt-bin``
Review comment:
It would also be good to remove Ubuntu 14.04 from documentation as it is
no longer supported.
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File path: source/installguide/management-server/_database.rst
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@@ -293,6 +294,9 @@ same node for MySQL. See `“Install the Database on the
Management Server Node
sudo service mysql restart
+ .. note::
+ Before performing a reboot of the management server please check if
mysql is configured to start automatically.
Review comment:
`mysql` -> `MySQL`
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