On 5/08/2003 11:49 [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:

new marketing strategy and dealing with all the due credits and copyright restrictions

Thanks for the copyright stuff! Some remarks:


+ Apache Cocoon is a web development framework built around the concept
+ of separation of concerns (that is: allowing people to do their job
+ without having to step on each other toes) and component-oriented web + RAD.

The term RAD has a very (out)dated sound in my ears. Surely RAD is OK, but people will hear RAD and understand '4GL'. My rephrasing:


Apache Cocoon is a web development framework built around the concepts of separation of concerns (making sure people can interact and collaborate on a project, without stepping on each other toes) and component-based web development.

+ Cocoon implements these concepts around the notion of 'component
+ pipelines' modelled after the 'process chain' concept where each + worker specializes on a particular operation. This makes it possible
+ to use a Lego(tm)-like approach in building web solutions where
+ these components can be hooked together into pipelines without
+ requiring further programming.

That first sentence is very 'jserv-like'. ;-) I would reduce verbiage into:


Cocoon implements these concepts around the notion of 'component pipelines', each component on the pipeline specializing on a particular operation. This makes it possible to use a Lego(tm)-like approach in building web solutions, hooking together components into pipelines without any required programming.

+ We like to think at Cocoon as "web glue" for your web application
+ development needs. But most important, a glue that can keep + concerns separate and allow parallel evolution of the two sides, + improving development pace and reducing the chance of conflicts.

"What two sides?"... Also, maybe we should sound a little bit stronger:


Cocoon is "web glue for your web application development needs". It is a glue that keeps concerns separate and

+ Cocoon has been designed to interoperate side-by-side with your J2EE
^^^^^^^^^^^^

"coexist and interoperate"? (introducing more verbiage ;-)

+ existing solutions or give them new functionality without requiring + any change in the existing infrastructure.

<snip/>


+This product includes software developed by the IronSmith Project +(http://www.ironsmith.org/).

Eh?


  +Portions are Copyright (c) 2001 Tivano Software GmbH
  +(http://www.tivano.de). All Rights Reserved.

Eh?


+Portions are Copyright (c) 2001 Scott Robert Ladd. All rights reserved.

Eh?


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