stevenn     2003/08/12 02:36:33

  Modified:    .        README.txt
               src/documentation/xdocs index.xml
  Log:
  marketing text fixes and update of documentation home page to reflect the final text
  
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  1.7       +3 -2      cocoon-2.1/README.txt
  
  Index: README.txt
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  RCS file: /home/cvs/cocoon-2.1/README.txt,v
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  --- README.txt        12 Aug 2003 07:15:52 -0000      1.6
  +++ README.txt        12 Aug 2003 09:36:32 -0000      1.7
  @@ -18,8 +18,9 @@
     hooking together components into pipelines without any required programming.
   
     Cocoon is "web glue for your web application development needs". It is a glue
  -  that keeps concerns separate and allows parallel evolution of the two sides,
  -  improving development pace and reducing the chance of conflicts.
  +  that keeps concerns separate and allows parallel evolution of all aspects of
  +  a web application, improving development pace and reducing the chance of
  +  conflicts.
   
   
   
  
  
  
  1.6       +28 -15    cocoon-2.1/src/documentation/xdocs/index.xml
  
  Index: index.xml
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  RCS file: /home/cvs/cocoon-2.1/src/documentation/xdocs/index.xml,v
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  --- index.xml 14 Jul 2003 20:29:40 -0000      1.5
  +++ index.xml 12 Aug 2003 09:36:33 -0000      1.6
  @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
   <document>
     <header>
       <title>Apache Cocoon</title>
  -    <subtitle>XML Publishing Framework</subtitle>
  +    <subtitle>XML Web Development Framework</subtitle>
       <authors>
         <person name="cocoon-dev" email="[EMAIL PROTECTED]"/>
       </authors>
  @@ -12,22 +12,35 @@
       <figure src="images/cocoon.gif" alt="Cocoon"/>
       <s1 title="What is Cocoon?">
         <p>
  -   Apache Cocoon is an XML publishing framework that raises the usage of
  -   XML and XSLT technologies for server applications to a new
  -   level. Designed for performance and scalability around pipelined SAX
  -   processing, Cocoon offers a flexible environment based on a separation
  -   of concerns between content, logic, and style. To top this all off, 
  -   Cocoon's centralized configuration system and sophisticated caching help
  -   you to create, deploy, and maintain rock-solid XML server applications.
  +        Apache Cocoon is a web development framework built around the concepts of
  +        separation of concerns (making sure people can interact and collaborate on a
  +        project, without stepping on each other toes) and component-based web
  +        development.
         </p>
         <p>
  -   Cocoon interacts with most data sources, including filesystems, RDBMS,
  -   LDAP, native XML databases, and network-based data sources. It adapts
  -   content delivery to the capabilities of different devices like HTML, WML,
  -   PDF, SVG, and RTF, to name just a few. You can run Cocoon as a Servlet as well as
  -   through a powerful, commandline interface. The deliberate design of its abstract 
  -   environment gives you the freedom to extend its functionality to meet your 
  -   special needs in a highly modular fashion.
  +        Cocoon implements these concepts around the notion of 'component pipelines',
  +        each component on the pipeline specializing on a particular operation. This
  +        makes it possible to use a Lego(tm)-like approach in building web solutions,
  +        hooking together components into pipelines without any required programming.
  +      </p>
  +      <p>
  +        Cocoon is "<em>web glue for your web application development needs</em>". It
  +        is a glue that keeps concerns separate and allows parallel evolution of the
  +        two sides, improving development pace and reducing the chance of conflicts.
  +      </p>
  +      <p>
  +        Cocoon has been designed to coexist and interoperate side-by-side with your
  +        existing J2EE solutions or to give them new functionality without requiring
  +        any change in the existing infrastructure.
  +      </p>
  +      <p>
  +        Cocoon interacts with many data sources, including filesystems, RDBMS,
  +        LDAP, native XML databases, and network-based data sources. It adapts
  +        content delivery to the capabilities of different devices like HTML, WML,
  +        PDF, SVG, and RTF, to name just a few. You can run Cocoon as a Servlet as 
well as
  +        through a powerful, commandline interface. The deliberate design of its 
abstract 
  +        environment gives you the freedom to extend its functionality to meet your 
  +        special needs in a highly modular fashion.
         </p> 
       </s1>
       <s1 title="Where can I find it?">
  
  
  

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