I would clarify the project goals, this could be better: "Commons RDF is a
set of interfaces for the RDF 1.1 concepts that can be used to expose
common RDF-1.1 concepts using common Java interfaces."

Maybe something like:"Commons RDF is a set of interfaces and classes for
RDF 1.1 concepts and behaviors. The API module defines interfaces and base
classes. The simple implementation module provides..."

I think it would be good to note that the discussion is still ongoing as to
whether CommonsRDF will be a TLP or Commons component. It's not clear to me
that this has been decide 100% ATM. I know that this could change in the
future but I would make a note of it.

"A number of bootstrapping issues have been addressed"

Can these be _succinctly_ summarized? This would help show the board what
kind of issues and being resolved in a little bit more details.

Gary

On Mon, Mar 30, 2015 at 11:19 AM, Lewis John Mcgibbney <
[email protected]> wrote:

> Hi Mentors,
> Please review
> https://wiki.apache.org/incubator/April2015
> Thanks
> Lewis
>
>
> --
> *Lewis*
>



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