I am taking a technical writing class and needed to produce a 5-10 page technical document. I elected to re-write the Getting Started for iOS Guide (attached). I wrote the document based on a new Mac and/or Xcode user. It may be more detailed than we want to publish with Cordova. I'd appreciate feedback on the document and would like to post if publicly for feedback via the PhoneGap google group if that does not pose any problems.
I searched through the Apple Trademark info ( http://www.apple.com/legal/trademark/guidelinesfor3rdparties.html) and believe I have given proper attribution within the document. However, the attribution varies when the document is distributed outside of the US. I used the United States references but I'm not sure what the Apache policy is? I also included a copyright notice at the end of the file with the Apache license. I did set it to copyright 2012 Becky Gibson but can remove my name if that is a problem. I'd appreciate any feedback on the document by November 28. Also, is something we would consider as part of the Cordova Docs? If so, what format or HTML template should I use (it would be tedious to convert this to markdown but probably not impossible). Please let me know about any concerns posting to the google group. thanks, -becky
