Looks like a great start. I like the logo/header image - I think it’s quite a 
clever concept (the wise owl sitting at a keyboard). I think the black & white 
image you have on Twitter could be simplified further, to be more abstract 
rather than a literal line-art representation of the photo. It will also 
simplify animal selection if we ever publish a book about the project via 
O’Reilly ;)

The content that’s up so far is a good start, though the introductory 
information needs to be more clearly accessible and better formatted 
(paragraphs). I’ll have a crack at this myself in the next few days, as part of 
other long-overdue efforts to write documentation for newcomers.

—
Dr Peter M. Kelly
[email protected]

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> On 22 Dec 2014, at 5:33 am, Dorte Fjalland <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> Hi,
> The Corinthia website <http://corinthia.incubator.apache.org/index.html>
> has been published and is ready for comments, critique, suggestions etc.
> The site has a frontpage with just a few words about what Corinthia is
> about and that volunteers are welcome onboard.
> There is a community tab with a How to contribute text and a Contributor
> guide text inspired by other incubator project websites. Then there is a
> Learn more tab with a text about Corithia history, description, goal, etc.
> The Documentation tab is meant to link to the Wiki. All texts need to be
> worked on/revised by people who have the knowledge. Changes to the site
> will be made after New Year.
> 
> The FB page and Twitter accounts have got the same banner/cover as the
> website and you are welcome to Like/Follow them.
> 
> Please check out the site on your mobile devises to see how the responsive
> design works.
> 
> Look forward to hearing from you.
> 
> Regards
> Dorte Fjalland
> 
> 
> <http://www.jandorte.com/>

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