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Branch: refs/heads/master
Commit: a3e59fbd648df98d9f243aed339476064f35ad68
Parents: 4481e45
Author: Noah Slater <[email protected]>
Authored: Sun Feb 2 16:01:07 2014 +0100
Committer: Noah Slater <[email protected]>
Committed: Sun Feb 2 16:01:07 2014 +0100

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diff --git a/email/invite_translator.txt b/email/invite_translator.txt
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@@ -6,28 +6,26 @@ Subject: Invitation to join the CouchDB translation team
 
 Dear %NAME%,
 
-you have given us notice, that you would like to join the Apache CouchDB 
translation team. We appreciate your initiative very much and would like to 
invite you to join the team.
+Thank you for indicating that you would like to join the Apache CouchDB 
translation team.
 
-Before we can create an ASF translation service account for you, we kindly ask 
you to answer the following questions:
+Before we can create a translation account for you, please answer the 
following:
 
-What is your preferred username?
+ - What is your preferred username?
 
-       my preferred username is:
+ - Which language would you like to contribute to?
 
-On which language would you like to work?
+ - Are your contributions licensed to the public under the Apache License 2.0?
 
-       I would like to work on:
+(Your answer to the last question must be yes. But we need confirmation.)
 
-Please state that your contributions are under the Apache 2 license:
+Please reply to this email with your answers, making sure to copy 
[email protected].
 
-       I state, that my contributions are under the Apache 2 license (yes | 
no):
+If everything is satisfactory, we will create a translation account for you. 
You will then receive a confirmation email with your username and further 
instructions on how to set up your password.
 
-Please reply to this email and please write your answers to the above 
questions simply inline. It is important, that you keep 
[email protected] CC: . So simply reply-to-all.
+For more information, see:
 
-After receiving your email and reviewing your answers with a positive result, 
we will create an ASF translation service account for you. You will then 
receive a confirmation email with your username and instructions to setup your 
password.
+    https://wiki.apache.org/couchdb/Translation
 
-Please see also https://wiki.apache.org/couchdb/Translation for more 
information.
+If you have any questions, please reply to this mail.
 
-If you have any questions, please don't wait to ask on the 
[email protected] mailing-list.
-
-On behalf of the CouchDB translation Team,
\ No newline at end of file
+On behalf of the CouchDB translation Team,

Reply via email to