Section 2:
  - Link the text "the Apache Way" instead of "a set of common principles."
  - "community should be *A* fun and rewarding place to be for everyone 
involved."

Section 3:
  - Is there an ASF link for their definition of "hat?" This might be confusing 
to a non-English speaker. Even a glossary link - to explain that wearing a hat 
means playing a role, or acting within the expectations of that role.
  - Possibly move the "hats" discussion to after you define all the different 
roles, I'm not sure.
  - For the PMC Chair term, we should clarify whether consecutive means "more 
than 2 in a row" (unlike the US President) and whether that is calendar year, 
fiscal year, etc.

Section 4: 
  - Link to a definition of lazy consensus provided by the ASF or another 
project if available.
  - Bold "silence is assent." This is a key thing people need to understanda 
bout lazy consensus.
  - You might want to include the entire content of the +1/0/-1/fractions 
section from the apache.org link. Your definitions are different thana those 
stated.
  - Explain who is allowed to veto - any user? Committer? PMC member? Is this 
on any PR? Any line of code? Any email to dev@? user@? Can a crackpot come by 
and -1 the entire project with an email to user@, requiring a vote for 
validity? ;) The definition of "change to code" is too broad as it stands in 
this document. The table shows challenging a veto but not the veto itself.
  - Section 4.6 put "ASF Board approval" so it's clear what board we're talking 
about

Recommend adding links once this is done in this document to the proposed Code 
of Conduct and Diversity statements so that they have additional weight by 
being referenced by the bylaws.

-Joan

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