On Mon, 2006-06-19 at 16:18 -0700, marbux wrote:
> On 6/19/06, G. Roderick Singleton <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> >
> > The use of "use" in teh Copyright and Trademark section of
> >
> > http://documentation.openoffice.org/files/documents/75/1817/OOoUSdocs_template.stwis
> >  what is of concern. Louis suggested that we change this to read:
> >
> >         The contents of this Documentation are subject to the Public
> >         Documentation License, Version 1.0 (the "License"); you may only
> >         edit or otherwise modify this Documentation if you comply with
> >         the terms of this License. A copy of the License is available
> >         at:
> >         http://www.openoffice.org/licenses/PDL.rtf
> >
> > Not legally accurate. There is no violation of copyright in modifying a
> document. The relevant violation only occurs if the modified file is
> "copied" or "distributed." So I would suggest something like,
> 
> >>> you may only copy or distribute any modified versions of this
> Documentation that you create if you comply with the terms of this
> License.<<<
> 
> Or,
> 
> >>> your rights to copy and/or distribute this Documentation, including any
> derivative works, are limited by this license.<<<

Thanks. I have revised the paragraph to read:

        The contents of this Documentation are subject to the Public
        Documentation License, Version 1.0 (the "License"). Your rights
        to copy and/or distribute this Documentation, including any
        derivative works, are limited by this license. A copy of the
        License is available at:
        http://www.openoffice.org/licenses/PDL.rtf

If this meets our needs, I will do up a set of new templates and revise
existing docs, as I get a chance.
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