Hi John,
>-----Original Message----- >From: dev <dev-boun...@dpdk.org> On Behalf Of John McNamara >Sent: Friday 22 May 2020 15:06 >To: dev@dpdk.org >Cc: tho...@monjalon.net; Mcnamara, John <john.mcnam...@intel.com> >Subject: [dpdk-dev] [PATCH v1] doc: update release notes for 20.05 > >Fix grammar, spelling and formatting of DPDK 20.05 release notes. > >Signed-off-by: John McNamara <john.mcnam...@intel.com> >--- > doc/guides/rel_notes/release_20_05.rst | 264 +++++++++++++++-------------- >---- > 1 file changed, 116 insertions(+), 148 deletions(-) > >diff --git a/doc/guides/rel_notes/release_20_05.rst >b/doc/guides/rel_notes/release_20_05.rst >index 8470690..d10a1f4 100644 >--- a/doc/guides/rel_notes/release_20_05.rst >+++ b/doc/guides/rel_notes/release_20_05.rst <snip> > > * **Updated Telemetry Library.** > >- The updated Telemetry library has many improvements on the original >version >- to make it more accessible and scalable: >+ The updated Telemetry library has been significantly in relation to >+ the original version to make it more accessible and scalable: I think there may be a word missing - "significantly improved in" might have been intended here. <snip> - Ciara
