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Antonio Gallardo commented on EXLBR-23: --------------------------------------- I already committed the changes. Thanks for reporting! > Typo - "is a simple put powerful concept." > ------------------------------------------ > > Key: EXLBR-23 > URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/EXLBR-23 > Project: Excalibur Components > Type: Bug > Components: Documentation > Environment: N/A > Reporter: James Ferguson > Priority: Trivial > > On the Front Page under "What is excalibur?", second paragraph first sentence > reads: > " Inversion of control, also known as the hollywood principle ("don't call > us, we'll call you") is a simple put powerful concept." > I suspect this should read: > "Inversion of control, also known as the hollywood principle ("don't call us, > we'll call you"), is simply put a powerful concept." > At present the sentence does not make sense. > In the folowing paragraph (What is excalibur? pg. 3) there is another trivial > typo, it currently reads: > "It is lightweight, by which we mean that it doesn't need a lot of resources, > take a lot of disk or memory, or impose all sorts of demans on its > environment." > 'demans' should read 'demands'. > Both trivial I know, but two typos in the first Section of the main page > don't make a good impression. -- This message is automatically generated by JIRA. - If you think it was sent incorrectly contact one of the administrators: http://issues.apache.org/jira/secure/Administrators.jspa - For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] For additional commands, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
