> On Sept. 17, 2015, 3:33 p.m., Scott Preece wrote:
> >

Thanks Scott for reviewing the doc. I have incorporated your comments.


> On Sept. 17, 2015, 3:33 p.m., Scott Preece wrote:
> > docs/src/site/twiki/FalconEmailNotification.twiki, line 3
> > <https://reviews.apache.org/r/38448/diff/1/?file=1075835#file1075835line3>
> >
> >     Recommend text change:
> >     Change "sending email based notification from Falcon when scheduled 
> > feed/process instance completed"
> >     
> >     To:
> >     "sending email notifications when scheduled feed/process instances 
> > complete."

Done.


> On Sept. 17, 2015, 3:33 p.m., Scott Preece wrote:
> > docs/src/site/twiki/FalconEmailNotification.twiki, line 14
> > <https://reviews.apache.org/r/38448/diff/1/?file=1075835#file1075835line14>
> >
> >     Recommend a text change:
> >     "specifies the address to send notifications to; multiple recipients 
> > may be provided as a comma-separated list"

Done.


> On Sept. 17, 2015, 3:33 p.m., Scott Preece wrote:
> > docs/src/site/twiki/FalconEmailNotification.twiki, line 8
> > <https://reviews.apache.org/r/38448/diff/1/?file=1075835#file1075835line8>
> >
> >     Will it confuse users that the "to" part looks like a literal e-mail 
> > address? Will people think that's the value they should use, rather than 
> > the intended recipient address?

I have put more realistic email address to avoid confusion.


- Peeyush


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> (Updated Sept. 17, 2015, 7:07 a.m.)
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> 
> Review request for Falcon.
> 
> 
> Bugs: FALCON-1426
>     https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/FALCON-1426
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> 
> Repository: falcon-git
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> Description
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> FALCON-1426: Documentation for Falcon Email notification
> 
> 
> Diffs
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> 
>   docs/src/site/twiki/EntitySpecification.twiki bf45598 
>   docs/src/site/twiki/FalconDocumentation.twiki 68ed2e2 
>   docs/src/site/twiki/FalconEmailNotification.twiki PRE-CREATION 
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> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/38448/diff/
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> 
> Testing
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> 
> Yes.
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Peeyush Bishnoi
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