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Clement Escoffier commented on FELIX-2827:
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Hi,
I've updated the page. Will be sync shortly.
Thanks !
> Spelling Mistake
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> Key: FELIX-2827
> URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/FELIX-2827
> Project: Felix
> Issue Type: Bug
> Components: Documentation
> Reporter: Andriyko
> Assignee: Clement Escoffier
> Labels: grammar, spelling
>
> In the Providing OSGI services:
> http://felix.apache.org/site/providing-osgi-services.html#ProvidingOSGiservices-Instancereconfiguration
> The mistakes are:
> 1. Under "Service Serving & Object Creation", first sentence in parenthesis,
> first word should be "from" not "form".
> 2. Under "Service Serving & Object Creation", in the bullet points under
> "Other strategies are available:", first point: "strategy="instance" allows
> creating one service object per asking iPOJO instance (despite they are in
> the same bundle)" - I find the use of word "asking" weird here, and the
> wording inside the parenthesis is confusing - what is in the same bundle as
> what?
> 3. In the section titled "Several Service Providing (XML only)", "Several
> Service Providing" is not a proper sentence or a combination of words, I
> think.
> 4. Under "Several Service Providing (XML only)", 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence:
> "All this provided service will be manage" - should be "managed". Also it is
> not clear what is meant by - "by the same handler but separately", how can
> the same handler manage them "separately", as opposed to "together"?
> 5. Under "Service Property Propagation", 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence, ends in
> "to all published service.", should be "services".
> 6. Section titled "Publishing abstract and concrete class as services"
> perhaps should be titled "Publishing an Abstract or Concrete class as a
> Service"?. Same change must be carried into the 1st sentence.
> 7. Under "Publishing abstract and concrete class as services", last sentence
> of the section "However, such practice are not recommended.", should be "is
> not.".
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