Stefan Taxhet wrote:
Hi,
Laurent Godard wrote:
please have a look at the suggested text, which will appear on the
online update page in the first start up-wizard.
Here comes the text proposal:
OpenOffice.org searches automatically at regular intervals
for new versions
In doing so online update does not transfer personal data.
too much or not enough :)
In doing so online update does send only needed information such as
current version, operating system type ...
"In doing so online update does send only needed information about the
product OpenOffice.org ($PRODUCTNAME) and does not transfer personal data."
+1 - this sounds reasonable for me
Juergen
I think we should try to find a balance between pointing out that no
personal data is sent and listing the concrete data items. The
transferred data may change without compromizing our privacy policy.
May be Allen - as a native speaker - can help here?
Greetings
Stefan
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