> On April 9, 2013, 5:39 p.m., Alessandro Presta wrote:
> > Looks much nicer!
> > Some random comments:
> > - I would try to reduce the amount of text on the landing page as much as 
> > possible: a few key sentences on the project (reference BSP, Pregel, 
> > Hadoop), how to build, and maybe a code snippet to show the vertex API. 
> > Everything else could probably be moved down or to other pages.
> > - The logo wastes quite a lot of space the way it's positioned (look at all 
> > the white space to its right). It would be better if it was side by side 
> > with the title or other text.
> > - There are some links to content that's probably outdated (e.g, the 
> > shortest paths example, the quick start guide). The menus could probably be 
> > better organized: we could separate user-oriented info (summary, license, 
> > mailing lists etc) from developer info (how to build the site, continuous 
> > integration, etc). The Modules section seems useless right now. License 
> > should probably link to the specific version. Do we even use all those 
> > Reports?
> > - The PageRank example currently has no code snippets. Also, in my opinion 
> > it's sufficient to call it PageRank (the Hello sounds a bit weird to me...).

I reduced the text a bit on the landing page (carved out two separate pages - 
how to contribute and presentations).  
Unfortunately, the design limits what we can do with the logo easily.
Changed Hello Page rank to just page rank.  I think the full example will 
require a bit more effort.  Let's put what we have in now so that we can get 
everyone working on some documentation.

Here's the revised site:
http://people.apache.org/~aching/staging/


- Avery


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On April 9, 2013, 10:25 p.m., Avery Ching wrote:
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> (Updated April 9, 2013, 10:25 p.m.)
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> 
> Review request for giraph.
> 
> 
> Description
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> 
> The website was in a horrible state (didn't even build).  I fixed this and 
> ported it to a modern skin (fluido).
> 
> * Google +1 / Facebook like support
> * Google site search support
> * Modified ConfigurationUtils.java to support a non-munged profile
> * Updated incubator references
> * Added hudson location
> * Site now is a multi-module site instead of giraph-core only
> * Changed site layout to be more modern using the fluido skin
> * Added instructions on building the site
> * Added initial Hello, Page Rank example 
> * Here's what the site looks like now 
> http://apachegiraph.zapto.org/~aching/staging/
> 
> 
> This addresses bug GIRAPH-612.
>     https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/GIRAPH-612
> 
> 
> Diffs
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> 
>   giraph-accumulo/pom.xml fd1ee2beb170b8c8cc141c4c9f6821f78b2476c6 
>   giraph-core/pom.xml 2f473ed764f94e61aa3bac50287424e64a13750d 
>   giraph-core/src/main/java/org/apache/giraph/utils/ConfigurationUtils.java 
> 9ebe69301e2c42eb4d96c9916d4acb72ae795fa2 
>   giraph-core/src/site/resources/css/site.css 
> bd3e914cb7e3a13ee85e821fb2d73650077c4a03 
>   giraph-core/src/site/resources/images/ApacheGiraph.svg 
> 8c339c8fea13be1ed5d6280c61fe9271e636917f 
>   giraph-core/src/site/site.xml 24b7ab25ed2103c6c96e68d7e73d64977a2851cb 
>   giraph-core/src/site/xdoc/index.xml 
> 2d496a229ae0db933c0a94047ec0c4dddfebabe4 
>   giraph-examples/pom.xml 21e8ccfc20042b14fcd2059272522001d566e716 
>   giraph-hbase/pom.xml 41b27e82aac24ded3ccb06eba527f5f8cf70bceb 
>   giraph-hcatalog/pom.xml ee5710a67fcda5fdc5a77e9cdf4a2fc9e9722c88 
>   giraph-hive/pom.xml 2f80165ff6ecd4f255f8c6e9cd3acdf07c872817 
>   pom.xml 71467cdc1ef83ad835ab7522e6112e8c1389a772 
>   src/site/resources/css/site.css PRE-CREATION 
>   src/site/resources/images/ApacheGiraph.svg PRE-CREATION 
>   src/site/site.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   src/site/xdoc/build_site.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   src/site/xdoc/generating_patches.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   src/site/xdoc/index.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   src/site/xdoc/javadoc_modules.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   src/site/xdoc/pagerank.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   src/site/xdoc/presentations.xml PRE-CREATION 
> 
> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/10365/diff/
> 
> 
> Testing
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> 
> Built the site.
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Avery Ching
> 
>

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