Github user necouchman commented on a diff in the pull request:
https://github.com/apache/guacamole-manual/pull/92#discussion_r210519471
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@@ -3009,13 +3009,102 @@ ed272546-87bd-4db9-acba-e36e1a9ca20a
<primary>SSH</primary>
<secondary>color
scheme</secondary>
</indexterm>The color scheme to
use for the terminal
- emulator used by SSH connections.
Each color scheme dictates
- the default foreground and
background color for the
- terminal. Programs which specify
colors when printing text
- will override these
defaults.</para>
- <para>This parameter is optional. By
default, Guacamole will
- render text as gray over a black
background.</para>
- <para>Possible values are:</para>
+ emulator used by SSH connections.
It consists of a
+ semicolon-separated series of
name-value pairs, separated by
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I'd suggest a slight tweak to this language - perhaps something like:
> It consists of a semicolon-separated series of name-value pairs, where
each name-value pair is separate by a colon, ...
or something else that clarifies this a little bit. My initial take on
this is, "Well, is it separate by a semicolon or a colon?" I get it when I
look at the examples, but I think it has the potential to cause some confusion.
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