mike-jumper commented on a change in pull request #144:
URL: https://github.com/apache/guacamole-manual/pull/144#discussion_r445911576
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File path: src/chapters/jdbc-auth.xml
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@@ -100,7 +100,13 @@
</para>
<para>The MySQL Driver implements several parameters
specific to configuring
SSL for secure connections to MySQL servers that
support or require
- encrypted communications. The parameters are as
follows:</para>
+ encrypted communications. The SSL configuration
options are targeted
+ at newer versions of the MySQL Connector/J and MariaDB
Connector/J.
+ Older versios of MySQL Connector/J have known issues
with SSL
Review comment:
versions*
For the sake of readability, I would additionally:
* Wrap that main "older versions have known issues" bit within `<emphasis>`,
as it's fairly important
* Clean up the repeated "Connector/J" a bit, as it's hard to read with all
those slashes and repetition.
For example:
> The MySQL Driver implements several parameters specific to configuring SSL
for secure connections to MySQL servers that support or require encrypted
communications. _Older versions of Connector/J driver have known issues with
SSL verification_. If you experience problems connecting to SSL-secured MySQL
or MariaDB databases, it is recommended that you update to a current version of
the driver.
>
> Configuration parameters for MySQL-compatible SSL support are as follows:
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