Nadya,

Due to resource location changes my hand-made scripts stopped to work:
all security tests failed with "*** implementation not found". I
decided to get used to Geir's federated build.

I tried to find quickly quickhelp_contributors.html serfing our web
site. I stopped reading the first page right after the words: "Big
News: Apache Harmony is a top-level project of the Apache Software
Foundation! See below for more information."

After visiting "Documentation", "Get Involved", "Source Code",
"DRLVM", "Contribution Policy" sections I used search in my mailbox
and found that you added this reference to "Downloads" section. This
is a good location, but it didn't yet appeared at the actual web site.

I decided to download the web site and use search.

$ grep -rl quickhelp_contributors
harmony.apache.org/harmony.apache.org/index.html
harmony.apache.org/quickhelp_users.html
harmony.apache.org/subcomponents/buildtest/index.html
harmony.apache.org/subcomponents/classlibrary/index.html

There are plenty of places, though I missed them. I believe we need do
the following:
* It's ok to keep references at the first page.
* Let's add build instruction to the documentation map.
* Let's add build instruction to "Get involved".
* Let's remove "Source code" section at all or replace it with a
reference to ViewSvn.

What do u think?

With best regards,
Alexei

On 11/30/06, [EMAIL PROTECTED] <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
Author: nadinem
Date: Thu Nov 30 02:11:14 2006
New Revision: 480884

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?view=rev&rev=480884
Log:
Resolve HARMONY-1730: applied patches downloads.patch; quickhelp_users.patch

Modified:
   harmony/standard/site/docs/downloads.html
   harmony/standard/site/docs/quickhelp_users.html
   harmony/standard/site/xdocs/downloads.xml
   harmony/standard/site/xdocs/quickhelp_users.xml

Modified: harmony/standard/site/docs/downloads.html
URL: 
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/harmony/standard/site/docs/downloads.html?view=diff&rev=480884&r1=480883&r2=480884
==============================================================================
--- harmony/standard/site/docs/downloads.html (original)
+++ harmony/standard/site/docs/downloads.html Thu Nov 30 02:11:14 2006
@@ -214,13 +214,17 @@
                                <p>
               Access to <a href="svn.html">the code repository</a> is 
available to all, and we have
               <a href="documentation/documentation.html">instructions</a> for 
building the
-               virtual machine code and <a 
href="documentation/build_classlib.html">
-               building the class library code</a>.
-       </p>
+               virtual machine code. For information on how to get configured 
to build and
+    work with the Apache Harmony source code, refer to
+    <a href="http://incubator.apache.org/harmony/quickhelp_contributors.html";>
+      Getting Started For Contributors</a>. For instructions on how to point 
to local
+    versions instead of making the build download new ones from the net, refer 
to the
+    <a 
href="http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/harmony/enhanced/drlvm/trunk/README.txt?view=co";>
+      README file</a>.
+  </p>
                                <p>
-        However, if you don't want to build it, we now offer snapshots of our 
JRE and
-        <a href="subcomponents/classlibrary/hdk.html">HDK</a>
-        for Linux and Windows x86-based platforms.
+        However, if you don not want to build it, we now offer snapshots of 
our JRE and HDK
+        for the Linux and Windows platforms.
    </p>

    <h2>

Modified: harmony/standard/site/docs/quickhelp_users.html
URL: 
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/harmony/standard/site/docs/quickhelp_users.html?view=diff&rev=480884&r1=480883&r2=480884
==============================================================================
--- harmony/standard/site/docs/quickhelp_users.html (original)
+++ harmony/standard/site/docs/quickhelp_users.html Thu Nov 30 02:11:14 2006
@@ -229,7 +229,7 @@
    </h2>

                        <p>
-            First of all, download the binary distribution appropriate to
+            First, download the binary distribution appropriate to
            your platform. We currently distribute binaries for Linux and
            Microsoft Windows. Please follow the instructions on the
            <a href="downloads.html">download page</a>
@@ -248,10 +248,10 @@
    </h2>

                        <p>
-            Once you have obtained the appropriate binary distribution,
-            you need to unpack it on your machine. In all cases, the
+            Once you have obtained the appropriate binary distribution,
+            you need to unpack it on your machine. In all cases, the
            distribution will unpack into a <code>jre</code>
-            directory. Further in the document we refer to this directory
+            directory. Further in the document we refer to this directory
            as the <i>root directory</i> of the distribution.
        </p>
                                <strong>Linux Users</strong>
@@ -266,19 +266,19 @@
        </p>
                                <strong>Windows Users</strong>
                                <p>
-          Use one of <code>zip</code> utilities available for Windows to
-          unpack the distribution. The three popular ones are listed
-          below, but anything that can handle a <code>zip</code> file
+          Use one of <code>zip</code> utilities available for Windows to
+          unpack the distribution. The three popular ones are listed
+          below, but anything that can handle a <code>zip</code> file
          will work:
        </p>
                                <ul>
-            <li><a href="http://www.info-zip.org/";>Info-ZIP</a>
+            <li><a href="http://www.info-zip.org/";>Info-ZIP</a>
                (open source software)</li>
            <li><a href="http://www.7-zip.org/";>7-Zip</a> (free software)</li>
            <li><a href="http://www.winzip.com/";>Winzip</a> (commercial)</li>
        </ul>
                                <p>
-            To create the JRE directory tree, extract the
+            To create the JRE directory tree, extract the
            distribution <code>zip</code> file using the utility.
        </p>

@@ -288,13 +288,13 @@
    </h2>

                        <p>
-            Apache Harmony requires no further environmental setup, but
-            sometimes other programs do. Also, it is convenient to have
+            Apache Harmony requires no further environmental setup, but
+            sometimes other programs do. Also, it is convenient to have
            the Apache Harmony executables on your path.
        </p>
                                <p>
-          To set your <code>JAVA_HOME</code> and <code>PATH</code>
-          environment variables, use the commands appropriate to your
+          To set your <code>JAVA_HOME</code> and <code>PATH</code>
+          environment variables, use the commands appropriate to your
          operating system and/or shell you are using.
        </p>
                                <strong>
@@ -309,11 +309,11 @@
 $ export PATH=`pwd`:$PATH
        </pre>
                                <p>
-            The given command assumes your current directory is the parent
-            directory of the Harmony JRE.
+            The given command assumes your current directory is the parent
+            directory of the Harmony JRE.
        </p>
                                <p class="note">Note</p>
-                                <p class="notetext">The <code>`</code> 
character is a backtick character,
+                                <p class="notetext">The <code>`</code> 
character is a backtick character,
      not an apostrophe.</p>
                                <strong>Windows Users</strong>
                                <p>
@@ -334,9 +334,9 @@
    </h2>

                        <p>
-            After performing aforementioned steps, you should be ready to use
+            After performing aforementioned steps, you should be ready to use
            Apache Harmony. Note that we have not yet included
-            <code>javac</code>, so continue to use the compiler from some
+            <code>javac</code>, so continue to use the compiler from some
            other JRE. You should have no problems running programs.
        </p>
                                <pre>

Modified: harmony/standard/site/xdocs/downloads.xml
URL: 
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/downloads.xml?view=diff&rev=480884&r1=480883&r2=480884
==============================================================================
--- harmony/standard/site/xdocs/downloads.xml (original)
+++ harmony/standard/site/xdocs/downloads.xml Thu Nov 30 02:11:14 2006
@@ -34,14 +34,18 @@
       <p>
               Access to <a href="svn.html">the code repository</a> is 
available to all, and we have
               <a href="documentation/documentation.html">instructions</a> for 
building the
-               virtual machine code and <a 
href="documentation/build_classlib.html">
-               building the class library code</a>.
-       </p>
+               virtual machine code. For information on how to get configured 
to build and
+    work with the Apache Harmony source code, refer to
+    <a href="http://incubator.apache.org/harmony/quickhelp_contributors.html";>
+      Getting Started For Contributors</a>. For instructions on how to point 
to local
+    versions instead of making the build download new ones from the net, refer 
to the
+    <a 
href="http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/harmony/enhanced/drlvm/trunk/README.txt?view=co";>
+      README file</a>.
+  </p>

    <p>
-        However, if you don't want to build it, we now offer snapshots of our 
JRE and
-        <a href="subcomponents/classlibrary/hdk.html">HDK</a>
-        for Linux and Windows x86-based platforms.
+        However, if you don not want to build it, we now offer snapshots of 
our JRE and HDK
+        for the Linux and Windows platforms.
    </p>

    <subsection name="Snapshot Builds">

Modified: harmony/standard/site/xdocs/quickhelp_users.xml
URL: 
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/quickhelp_users.xml?view=diff&rev=480884&r1=480883&r2=480884
==============================================================================
--- harmony/standard/site/xdocs/quickhelp_users.xml (original)
+++ harmony/standard/site/xdocs/quickhelp_users.xml Thu Nov 30 02:11:14 2006
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
    <subsection name="Download the Apache Harmony Snapshot">

        <p>
-            First of all, download the binary distribution appropriate to
+            First, download the binary distribution appropriate to
            your platform. We currently distribute binaries for Linux and
            Microsoft Windows. Please follow the instructions on the
            <a href="downloads.html">download page</a>
@@ -66,10 +66,10 @@
    <subsection name="Unpack the Binary Distribution">

        <p>
-            Once you have obtained the appropriate binary distribution,
-            you need to unpack it on your machine. In all cases, the
+            Once you have obtained the appropriate binary distribution,
+            you need to unpack it on your machine. In all cases, the
            distribution will unpack into a <code>jre</code>
-            directory. Further in the document we refer to this directory
+            directory. Further in the document we refer to this directory
            as the <i>root directory</i> of the distribution.
        </p>

@@ -90,34 +90,34 @@
        <strong>Windows Users</strong>

        <p>
-          Use one of <code>zip</code> utilities available for Windows to
-          unpack the distribution. The three popular ones are listed
-          below, but anything that can handle a <code>zip</code> file
+          Use one of <code>zip</code> utilities available for Windows to
+          unpack the distribution. The three popular ones are listed
+          below, but anything that can handle a <code>zip</code> file
          will work:
        </p>

        <ul>
-            <li><a href="http://www.info-zip.org/";>Info-ZIP</a>
+            <li><a href="http://www.info-zip.org/";>Info-ZIP</a>
                (open source software)</li>
            <li><a href="http://www.7-zip.org/";>7-Zip</a> (free software)</li>
            <li><a href="http://www.winzip.com/";>Winzip</a> (commercial)</li>
        </ul>
        <p>
-            To create the JRE directory tree, extract the
+            To create the JRE directory tree, extract the
            distribution <code>zip</code> file using the utility.
        </p>
    </subsection>

    <subsection name="Configuring Your Environment">
        <p>
-            Apache Harmony requires no further environmental setup, but
-            sometimes other programs do. Also, it is convenient to have
+            Apache Harmony requires no further environmental setup, but
+            sometimes other programs do. Also, it is convenient to have
            the Apache Harmony executables on your path.
        </p>

        <p>
-          To set your <code>JAVA_HOME</code> and <code>PATH</code>
-          environment variables, use the commands appropriate to your
+          To set your <code>JAVA_HOME</code> and <code>PATH</code>
+          environment variables, use the commands appropriate to your
          operating system and/or shell you are using.
        </p>

@@ -136,11 +136,11 @@
        </source>

        <p>
-            The given command assumes your current directory is the parent
-            directory of the Harmony JRE.
+            The given command assumes your current directory is the parent
+            directory of the Harmony JRE.
        </p>
      <p class="note">Note</p>
-      <p class="notetext">The <code>`</code> character is a backtick character,
+      <p class="notetext">The <code>`</code> character is a backtick character,
      not an apostrophe.</p>

      <strong>Windows Users</strong>
@@ -164,9 +164,9 @@
    <subsection name="Using Apache Harmony">

        <p>
-            After performing aforementioned steps, you should be ready to use
+            After performing aforementioned steps, you should be ready to use
            Apache Harmony. Note that we have not yet included
-            <code>javac</code>, so continue to use the compiler from some
+            <code>javac</code>, so continue to use the compiler from some
            other JRE. You should have no problems running programs.
        </p>






--
Thank you,
Alexei

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