Github user dyozie commented on a diff in the pull request:
https://github.com/apache/incubator-hawq-docs/pull/80#discussion_r94876821
--- Diff: admin/RunningHAWQ.html.md.erb ---
@@ -2,21 +2,36 @@
title: Running a HAWQ Cluster
---
-This section provides information for system administrators and database
superusers responsible for administering a HAWQ system.
-
-This guide provides information and instructions for configuring,
maintaining and using a HAWQ system. This guide is intended for system and
database administrators responsible for managing a HAWQ system.
-
-This guide assumes knowledge of Linux/UNIX system administration, database
management systems, database administration, and structured query language
\(SQL\). Because HAWQ is based on PostgreSQL 8.2.15, this guide assumes some
familiarity with PostgreSQL. This guide calls out similarities between HAWQ and
PostgreSQL features throughout. It contains the topics:
-
-* <a class="subnav" href="./ambari-admin.html">Managing HAWQ Using
Ambari</a>
-* <a class="subnav" href="./startstop.html">Starting and Stopping HAWQ</a>
-* <a class="subnav" href="./ClusterExpansion.html">Expanding a Cluster</a>
-* <a class="subnav" href="./ClusterShrink.html">Removing a Node</a>
-* <a class="subnav"
href="./BackingUpandRestoringHAWQDatabases.html">Backing Up and Restoring
HAWQ</a>
-* <a class="subnav" href="./HighAvailability.html">High Availability in
HAWQ</a>
-* <a class="subnav" href="./MasterMirroring.html">Master Mirroring</a>
-* <a class="subnav"
href="./HAWQFilespacesandHighAvailabilityEnabledHDFS.html">HAWQ Filespaces and
High Availability Enabled HDFS</a>
-* <a class="subnav" href="./FaultTolerance.html">Understanding the Fault
Tolerance Service</a>
-* <a class="subnav" href="./RecommendedMonitoringTasks.html">Recommended
Monitoring and Maintenance Tasks</a>
-* <a class="subnav" href="./maintain.html">Routine System Maintenance
Tasks</a>
-* <a class="subnav" href="./monitor.html">Monitoring a HAWQ System</a>
+Your HAWQ deployment environment is a collection of systems, processes,
and data, and the users that operate on these systems, processes, and data.
This section provides information for system administrators and database
superusers responsible for administering a HAWQ deployment.
+
--- End diff --
I think the lead sentence could use some cleanup - Your HAWQ deployment
environment is a collection of systems, processes, data, and the users that
operate on those systems, processes, and data.
Also, I know the original text mentioned database superusers but that seems
a bit weird to call them out. I think we could just stick with "system
administrators" here.
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