Github user dyozie commented on a diff in the pull request:
https://github.com/apache/incubator-hawq-docs/pull/86#discussion_r96096700
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@@ -14,54 +14,61 @@ For information about Amazon EC2, see the [EC2 User
Guide](http://docs.aws.amazo
## <a id="topic_nhk_df4_2v"></a>Create and Launch HAWQ Instances
-Use the *Amazon EC2 Console* to launch instances and configure, start,
stop, and terminate (delete) virtual servers. When you launch a HAWQ instance,
you select and configure key attributes via the EC2 Console.
+Use the **Amazon EC2 Console** to launch instances and configure, start,
stop, and terminate (delete) virtual servers. When you launch a HAWQ instance,
you select and configure key attributes via the EC2 Console.
### <a id="topic_amitype"></a>Choose AMI Type
-An Amazon Machine Image (AMI) is a template that contains a software
configuration including the operating system, application server, and
applications that best suit your purpose. When configuring a HAWQ virtual
instance, we recommend you use a *hardware virtualized* AMI running 64-bit Red
Hat Enterprise Linux version 6.4 or 6.5 or 64-bit CentOS 6.4 or 6.5. Obtain
the licenses and instances directly from the OS provider.
+An Amazon Machine Image (AMI) is a template that contains a specific
software configuration including the operating system, application server, and
applications that best suit your purpose. When configuring a HAWQ virtual
instance, we recommend that you use a *hardware virtualized* (HVM) AMI
supporting enhanced 10Gbps networking. Ensure the AMI is running 64-bit Red Hat
Enterprise Linux version 6.4 or 6.5 or 64-bit CentOS 6.4 or 6.5. Obtain the
licenses and instances directly from the OS provider.
### <a id="topic_selcfgstorage"></a>Consider Storage
-EC2 instances can be launched as either Elastic Block Store (EBS)-backed
or instance store-backed.
+EC2 instances are launched as either Elastic Block Store (EBS)-backed or
instance store-backed. Choose the storage type based on the expected lifetime
of your cluster and data.
-Instance store-backed storage is generally better performing than EBS and
recommended for HAWQ's large data workloads. SSD (solid state) instance store
is preferred over magnetic drives.
+#### <a id="topic_selcfgstorage_instance"></a>Instance Store-Backed
-**Note** EC2 *instance store* provides temporary block-level storage. This
storage is located on disks that are physically attached to the host computer.
While instance store provides high performance, powering off the instance
causes data loss. Soft reboots preserve instance store data.
-
-Virtual devices for instance store volumes for HAWQ EC2 instance store
instances are named `ephemeralN` (where *N* varies based on instance type).
CentOS instance store block device are named `/dev/xvdletter` (where *letter*
is a lower case letter of the alphabet).
+Use instance store-backed storage for short lived or transient clusters
that do not require long-term persistence of data. While instance store-backed
storage is generally better performing than EBS, it is not recommended for use
in a production environment.
+
+**Warning**: EC2 instance store provides *temporary* block-level storage.
This storage is located on disks that are physically attached to the host
computer. You will lose all instance store data when the AMI instance is
powered off.
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Seems like there's a problem with subject/verb agreement in the first
sentence, but probably just using the wrong term. Should this read:
**Warning**: Instance Store-Backed storage provides...
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