Hi,

Just suggestions only, feel free to ignore.
>   1. Transitioning code, website and Jira issues to the Apache repositories 
> by May 11th 2016 (before ApacheCon)
IMO mo need for the date or text after "repositories”.

>    2. Continuing iota website and code development using the Apache 
> infrastructure for single node ARM, single node INTEL and multi node INTEL 
> versions
>   
The board is probably not interested in this technical detail here  so I think 
the second half of the sentence can be dropped. getting the code base onto 
Apache should be the immediate goal.
> 3. Outreach to build an iota community via presentations at series of 
> conferences beginning with ApacheCon followed by 7x24 Spring Conference, Data 
> center Dynamics and others throughout the summer.

I like but perhaps consider conferences are not the only way to build community 
around the project.

> 
> Any issues that the Incubator PMC (IPMC) or ASF Board wish/need to be
> aware of?
> 
>   * None at this time.
> 
I think we should perhaps say something here about the show start of this 
project.

Thanks,
Justin

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