Hi David Looks pretty good to me. Some minor issues/suggestions:
* The footer is rendered at the top on the start page (intentionally?) * It would be nice if all references (e.g. see §3.7.1.2 Supertypes) were links. * In section "8.6.1.3 Root Declaring Node Type" some method signatures are linked to the API docs. This is good, but links point to the jsr-170 API. * In the right hand navigation element, "JCR v2.0: TOC" should be a link to the start page. * The lists in section "1.6 Acknowledgements" could do with some formatting (2-3 cols?) Regards Julian On Fri, Oct 2, 2009 at 6:07 PM, David Nuescheler <[email protected]> wrote: > hi guys, > > i tried to update the document sizes to be more meaningful... > > http://www.day.com/specs/jcr/2.0/ > (possibly hit reload in your browser in case you may still have stuff > in your cache) > > feedback still very welcome ;) > > regards, > david > > On Mon, Sep 28, 2009 at 3:13 PM, Bertrand Delacretaz > <[email protected]> wrote: >> Hi David, >> >> On Mon, Sep 28, 2009 at 2:59 PM, David Nuescheler <[email protected]> wrote: >>> please find a draft of the JSR 283 html version online. >>> >>> http://www.day.com/specs/jcr/2.0/ >> >> Cool >> >>> ...After looking into the split-up I am tempted to created fewer >>> bigger documents instead.... >> >> Yes...pages like http://www.day.com/specs/jcr/2.0/3.6.1.5_DOUBLE.html >> makes me thing that a single big HTML document would be fine. >> >> -Bertrand >> > > > > -- > David Nuescheler > Chief Technology Officer > mailto: [email protected] > > web: http://www.day.com/ http://dev.day.com > twitter: @daysoftware >
