Looks good overall!
I think the isolated sentence, "Powerful REST APIs as well as parallel SQL."
can be folded into the previous sentence.

On Fri, Jun 17, 2016 at 12:20 AM, Jan Høydahl <jan....@cominvent.com> wrote:

> Here’s a first shot, adjustments welcome!:
>
> *Before:*
> Solr is the popular, blazing fast, open source NoSQL search platform from
> the Apache Lucene project. Its major features include powerful full-text
> search, hit highlighting, faceted search, dynamic clustering, database
> integration, rich document (e.g., Word, PDF) handling, and geospatial
> search. Solr is highly scalable, providing fault tolerant distributed
> search and indexing, and powers the search and navigation features of many
> of the world's largest internet sites.
>
> *After:*
> Solr is the popular, blazing fast, open source NoSQL search platform from
> the Apache Lucene project. Its major features include powerful full-text
> search, hit highlighting, faceted search and analytics, rich document
> parsing and geospatial search. Powerful REST APIs as well as parallel SQL.
> Solr is enterprise grade, secure and highly scalable, providing fault
> tolerant distributed search and indexing, and powers the search and
> navigation features of many of the world's largest internet sites.
>
> --
> Jan Høydahl, search solution architect
> Cominvent AS - www.cominvent.com
>
> 16. jun. 2016 kl. 01.09 skrev Adrien Grand <jpou...@gmail.com>:
>
> Jan, there seems to be consensus about updating the description. Would you
> like to give it a try?
>
> Le mar. 14 juin 2016 à 17:18, Erick Erickson <erickerick...@gmail.com> a
> écrit :
>
>> +1
>>
>> On Tue, Jun 14, 2016 at 7:24 AM, David Smiley <david.w.smi...@gmail.com>
>> wrote:
>> > +1
>> >
>> > On Tue, Jun 14, 2016 at 4:55 AM Jan Høydahl <jan....@cominvent.com>
>> wrote:
>> >>
>> >>  - https://wiki.apache.org/solr/ReleaseNote61
>> >>
>> >>
>> >> The Solr lead-text in the announcement says:
>> >>
>> >> Solr is the popular, blazing fast, open source NoSQL search platform
>> from
>> >> the Apache Lucene project. Its major features include powerful
>> full-text
>> >> search, hit highlighting, faceted search, dynamic clustering, database
>> >> integration, rich document (e.g., Word, PDF) handling, and geospatial
>> >> search. Solr is highly scalable, providing fault tolerant distributed
>> search
>> >> and indexing, and powers the search and navigation features of many of
>> the
>> >> world's largest internet sites.
>> >>
>> >>
>> >> It may be worth to consider flagging some of the newer features such as
>> >> ParallellSQL, JDBC, CDCR or Security -- perhaps in place of some more
>> >> obvious feature like clustering or highlighting?
>> >>
>> >> --
>> >> Jan Høydahl, search solution architect
>> >> Cominvent AS - www.cominvent.com
>> >
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