Hi John,
John McCreesh wrote:
On Sat, 2006-04-29 at 00:02 +0200, Cor Nouws wrote:
One warning: when talking about this with some business-people (month or
so ago), it turned out that they could become offended. As if I
suggested that they would do illegal business ...
Good point - I've added "Microsoft's licence agreements are complicated
- it's easy to break them by mistake"
Smart ;-)
I just took a little time to read the (renewed) draft page.
Would it be an idea to put the added sentence two lines lower, after "If
you have a copy of ..."?
Furthermore, I would suggest think about changing the pay-off
"Get legal - get OpenOffice.org today!"
into something like
"No doubts about a legal Office - get OpenOffice.org today!"
(or "No fear about your Office being illegal", or ....)
Just to make it sound less accusing.
Greetings,
Cor
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