-----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- Hash: SHA1 Hi Graham, good work! A few things I personally would change.
The headline is a bit to most, most, most for my taste. I'd just leave all the superlatives out and present the case as is. Also, I think before publishing we should review the Trademark section at the bottom. It still contains the Word, Excel, PowerPoint, but that does not appear in the text (of the two page flyer). Once again, thanks for doing the rework. Kaj Graham wrote: > I've updated the two A4/A3 product flyer as previously noted. > available at > http://ooogear.co.nz/pub/ooo2prodflyera4en_update.odt > http://ooogear.co.nz/pub/ooo2prodflyera4en_update.pdf > > or at http://qa.openoffice.org/issues/show_bug.cgi?id=47686 > > From this I've created a single A4 version designed to be print on both sides > of a single A4. This one still has most the same info on it as the other but > is less graphical > > http://ooogear.co.nz/pub/ooo2prodflyer_singlea4en.odt > http://ooogear.co.nz/pub/ooo2prodflyer_singlea4en.pdf > > I've uploaded all these to Docs and Files(or at least "in the process", given > the speed of my dialup :( ) > > > John can we get these linked to the Marketing materials page > Thumbnails at > http://ooogear.co.nz/pub/prod_flyer_A4_thumbnail.png and > http://ooogear.co.nz//pub/prod_flyer_A3_thumbnail.png > > Cheers > G > - -- [EMAIL PROTECTED] http://conficio.blogspot.com/ ================================================ | We teach software one screencast at a time | ================================================ http://www.conficio.com/ Tel: +1 (781) 632 5773 - Fax: +1 (781) 207 9159 Conficio P.O.Box 761062, Melrose, MA 02176 -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.2.5 (MingW32) iD8DBQFFalIPRDUvrJRNjTARAisEAJ4jkYHfkF4yco7Dk3x31B0tKWTmZQCgo7ST 0qfJHFEtqosSRUozxMXiQ64= =jRP1 -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] For additional commands, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
