I think this design of long logo looks fine.
Later if Mnemonic becomes TLP, we can replace that "Incubating" with "Software 
Foundation" .
I also attached square logo for some cases. 

Other opinions?


Thanks,
Yanping 

-----Original Message-----
From: Gary [mailto:ga...@apache.org] 
Sent: Friday, April 22, 2016 8:58 PM
To: dev@mnemonic.incubator.apache.org
Subject: Re: Mnemonic website go alive.

I have added the Apache incubating to the logo, Please review the
attached picture, Thanks.

On 4/22/2016 1:20 PM, Wang, Yanping wrote:
> Another way is just add "Apache" in the logo above "Mnemonic", like some 
> other incubator did. 
>
> Yanping
>
>> On Apr 22, 2016, at 1:06 PM, Patrick Hunt <ph...@apache.org> wrote:
>>
>> Looks good. One thing that still seems a bit off to me is that
>> "Apache" isn't mentioned until near the bottom of your home page (on
>> my laptop it gets cut off before apache is even mentioned). Most (?)
>> other incubator projects make it clear right up front that this is an
>> Apache X project current under incubation... etc....
>>
>> Here are some examples I pseudo-randomly picked:
>> http://htrace.incubator.apache.org/
>> http://atlas.incubator.apache.org/
>> http://quarks.incubator.apache.org/
>>
>> Perhaps you can squeeze your tag line btw your logo and your code example? 
>> e.g.
>>
>> ---
>> <logo> headers...
>> "Apache Mnemonic (incubating) is a Java based non-volatile memory
>> library for in-place structured data processing and computing."
>> if (mnemonic.inUse....)
>> etc...
>> ----
>>
>> Something like that would make it clear right up front that this is an
>> Apache project.
>>
>> Patrick
>>
>>> On Fri, Apr 22, 2016 at 11:40 AM, Gary <qich...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>> Done, please review it, Thanks.
>>>
>>>> On 4/22/2016 10:54 AM, Gary wrote:
>>>> I'm going to fix it, Thanks Patrick.
>>>>
>>>>> On 4/22/2016 10:48 AM, Patrick Hunt wrote:
>>>>> btw, a few things that you need to address ASAP. Please review the
>>>>> branding guide:
>>>>> http://incubator.apache.org/guides/branding.html
>>>>> in particular you are missing the disclaimer:
>>>>> http://incubator.apache.org/guides/branding.html#disclaimers
>>>>> as well as the incubator logo (next section on that page)
>>>>>
>>>>> Patrick
>>>>>
>>>>>> On Fri, Apr 22, 2016 at 10:18 AM, Patrick Hunt <ph...@apache.org> wrote:
>>>>>> Kudos!
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Patrick
>>>>>>
>>>>>>> On Fri, Apr 22, 2016 at 10:05 AM, Gary <ga...@apache.org> wrote:
>>>>>>> Sorry I'm not good at website design and layout but I think I will try
>>>>>>> this for your review, could you please fire a JIRA ticket so I can post
>>>>>>> the screen snapshot instead of commits for experimental comparison ? 
>>>>>>> Thanks.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> On 4/22/2016 9:13 AM, Wang, Yanping wrote:
>>>>>>>> Thanks Gary and Debo.
>>>>>>>> Is there a way to use unshaded letters. I found they are difficult to 
>>>>>>>> read with white background.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>>>>> Yanping
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> -----Original Message-----
>>>>>>>> From: Gary [mailto:ga...@apache.org]
>>>>>>>> Sent: Friday, April 22, 2016 8:48 AM
>>>>>>>> To: dev@mnemonic.incubator.apache.org
>>>>>>>> Subject: Mnemonic website go alive.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Hi, Mnemonic website has been online, Please visit following URL to 
>>>>>>>> check.
>>>>>>>> http://mnemonic.incubator.apache.org/
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> We continue to improve and add contents to this website, please give us
>>>>>>>> your advice and contribute your code.
>>>>>>>> https://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator-mnemonic-site.git
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Thanks.
>>>>>>>> +Gary.

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