Having reviewed the doc in question, I find that it tends to wander a bit. Here's some thoughts I have on the first pass.
1. The doc starts out with general info on OpenLayers. I think that belongs elsewhere, with the exception of a one-paragraph blurb. Specifically, I've been using the blurb at the top of http://docs.openlayers.org/library/spherical_mercator The rest of the information should be available from the root of the site, which should be easily navigable once it is integrated into the documentation. This would apply, for example, to the examples links, api doc links, etc. 2. Documents should follow a somewhat natural progression, with a single topic, in my opinion. (So, for example, "TileCache" would belong in a doc on optimization or caching, rather than in an 'intro' doc.) 3. That progression should be outlined in prose/text form, rather than bullet points, in my opinion. "This document describes the Spherical Mercator projection, what it is, and when you should use it. It includes some background information, demonstration of using the code with just a commercial layer, and how to add a WMS over the top of that layer, and how to reproject coordinates within OpenLayers so that you can reproject coordinates inside of OpenLayers. It is expected that readers of this tutorial will have a basic understanding of reprojection and a basic understanding of OpenLayers.", for example, or in your case, possibly: This document will give you information on how to create a map and layer object, demonstrate creating your first map, and demonstrate creation of a commercial base layer, and how to add a vector file (like GML) over the top of it. If you take out the spherical mercator stuff like reprojection and server side configuration, it can probably be trimmed down to something closer to: http://trac.openlayers.org/wiki/Documentation/Dev/introduction though I think that needs to have a commercial layer addition added to it. I see this as a replacement for: http://openlayers.org/doc/ Which I think we should get rid of as soon as possible. :) I think we can work in the wiki while developing documentation, and then we can check that into the /doc/ tree as soon as we're happy with it. > I would like to know if you (and the community) are interesting to get more > document from me, and if others people are working on such document and which > topic (in order to avoid other duplicate works). I'm not aware of anyone else actively working on documentation at this time other than me, and I'm mostly just working on cleaning up/improving wiki pages we already have. Regards, -- Christopher Schmidt MetaCarta _______________________________________________ Dev mailing list Dev@openlayers.org http://openlayers.org/mailman/listinfo/dev