On Tue, Apr 10, 2012 at 02:32:48PM -0700, Ansis Atteka wrote:
> Add documentation on how to use OVS integration
> with the upcoming Libvirt 0.9.11 release.

Thanks for writing this!

Here, you might consider adding something like "or you installed Open
vSwitch from distribution packaging such as a .deb or .rpm", since
that's usually the easiest way to get OVS going:
> +scripts. This document assumes that you followed INSTALL.Linux to get Open
> +vSwitch setup on your Linux system and have libvirt 0.9.11 or later
> +installed. The Open vSwitch support is included by default in Libvirt.
> +Consult www.libvirt.org for instructions on how to build the latest Libvirt.

I'd write "for" instead of "per" here:
> +Lookup in the Domain XML file the <interface> section. There should be one
> +such XML section per each interface the VM has.

Assuming this is just regular XML, it would save the user a bit of
typing to, instead of:
> +  <virtualport type='openvswitch'>
> +  </virtualport>
to write:
<virtualport type='openvswitch'/>

Do we know of any common problems that we could explain how to solve
in the Troubleshooting section?

All of Kyle's feedback sounds good to me too.  (Thanks Kyle!)
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