On Sat, Mar 6, 2010 at 12:05 AM, Gurkan Erdogdu <[email protected]> wrote:

> OpenWebBeans team has pleased to announce the M4. It can be downloaded from 
> http://www.apache.org/dyn/closer.cgi/openwebbeans/.
>
> You can read the README file from 
> https://svn.apache.org/repos/asf/openwebbeans/tags/1.0.0-M4/readme/README_M4.txt.

Hi Gurkan,

Congratulations for the release.

I've just read the README_M4.txt and spot a couple of typos I thought
I'd report so the next release will get even better (in writing at the
very least :)):

1/ "M4 version is so closer to the full implementation of the JSR-299
and it is very stable." - the 'so' seems superfluous. I'd recommend
removing the entire sentence altogether as it doesn't add much value.

2/ "What is an OpenWebBeans?" - change 'an' to 'the' or better yet
replace it with 'Apache'

3/ s/is an ASL-License/is an ASL 2.0-licensed

4/ s/Project web page could be found at the URL :/The project's web
page can be found at:

5/ s/M4 Release Supports the followings/M4 release supports the
following features:

6/ s/M4 Release Does not Supports the followings/M4 release does not
support the following features

7/ s/Currently, you are not able to injection/Currently, it's not
possible to use injection

8/ s/Does not fully integrated with Geronimo/Does not fully integrate
with Geronimo

Jacek

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Jacek Laskowski
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