In Data Driven Architecture:
* An Item is a Python object that it can => An Item is a Python
object that can
* with a query against the repository - I assume you mean kindquery/
KindCollection
In Application Layer:
* At the top of the diagram, The application => At the top of the
diagram, the application
* python instead of Python in several places
* In Chandler, this method loads all of the Parcels and commits Items
defined in the parcels to the Repository - parcel load/commit only
happens if a parcel has not been previously loaded.
* <TODO: update diagram to include Application Bar> - this needs fixing
In Services:
* The Twisted framework enabled us to rather easily add the
experimental feature that Chandler can be run as a webserver - this
is an awkward sentence
In Repository:
* The transactional model is similar to that of CVS or SVN => The
transactional model is similar to that of CVS or Subversion (possibly
use links to CVS, SVN)
* The Repository View also provides a method, mapChanges() - it seems
odd to me to be singling out single methods for description in a
general architecture overview. Same for the reference to refresh()
in the next sentence
In Extension Parcels:
* An extension that integrates Flickr data - make a link to Flickr
* (including a flickr parcel) => (including a Flickr parcel)
* Fetches an amazon wish list => Fetches an Amazon wish list
In Collections and notifications:
* Virtual collections are created by combining basis collections (and
other virtual collections): Union Collection, Intersection
Collection, Difference Collection and Filter Collection. => Virtual
collections are created by combining basis collections and other
virtual collections. There are four Virtual Collections, Union
Collection, Intersection Collection, Difference Collection and Filter
Collection.
* with the Collection and implementing onCollectionEvent() - again
singling out specific methods; also refresh and onIdle in the next
paragraph
* We plan on implementing Item notifications => We plan on
implementing notifications on single Items
In Security:
* RSS reader, flickr and Amazon favorites. => Feeds (RSS reader),
Flickr, and Amazon wish list
* The email feature leverages Twisted for most of the functionality
and is expected to be reasonably robust -- do we mean robust or
secure here?
* Chandler ships with the same root certificates as Mozilla - do we
mean Mozilla the browser here? If so better to say Firefox. If not,
then "as the Mozilla Foundation"
* Extensions to Chandler, both (CPIA) scripts and parcels, are not
restricted to running in any kind of protected sandbox. => Extensions
to Chandler, (both CPIA scripts and parcels) do not run in any kind
of protected sandbox.
* It is the users = It is the user's
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