Hi Sanjeev, A great initiative and effort!! Thanks for taking time to creating a such video for the Stratos community!! As Lakmal has mentioned we might need to refine the script bit further. I have few comments:
- IMO having the first slide "SaaS" might give the audience a wrong impression. May be we should rather start with "PaaS" and say what Stratos is. - Regarding the visuals I think it would be better if we could include some animations rather than re-using the diagrams. Seeing the same set of diagrams in several places might not be attractive. - As I see 0:08 to 2:52 we have the same visual. May be we could improve this. - Regarding the length of the video, if we reduce it to around 2 to 3 min then IMO we could reach a much wider audience. Thanks On Mon, Jun 15, 2015 at 3:16 PM, Shavindri Dissanayake <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi Sanjeev & Team, > > I think this is a great initiative. Could we look at including the > polished up and finalised video in our docs (for this release maybe because > the video and script are already done) and the Apache Stratos website? > > We will be able to give the user a better understanding of what really > takes place through this. The Visual image on how things really work carry > a long way for a user along with the documentation. (When benchmarking our > docs we seem to be lacking the media to interact actively with the user, > therefore I believe this initiative will help us a lot. ) Additionally this > initiative will help market the product at least in a little way in the > long run. > > > Thanks & Regards > Shavindri Dissanayake > Technical Writer > > WSO2 Inc. > lean.enterprise.middleware > > On Fri, Jun 12, 2015 at 10:22 AM, Sanjeev Niles <[email protected]> wrote: > >> Hi All >> >> Thanks for the feedback thus far. >> The script is in the below link. Please add comments, so that changes can >> be done in the relevant places. >> >> >> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HEDn-z7fTnM31tAPz9HMcLnLzdkt1r6L-4SGF1QGnuQ/edit?usp=sharing >> >> >> @Lahiru >> I will take in what you have mentioned in your mail and add it in. >> >> Thanks and Regards >> >> Sanjeev >> >> Sanjeev Niles >> Senior Instructor >> WSO2 Inc. >> lean.enterprise.middleware. >> m: +94 777 814014 <%2B94%20773%20500185> >> w: http://wso2.com >> >> On Thu, Jun 11, 2015 at 11:39 PM, Lakmal Warusawithana <[email protected]> >> wrote: >> >>> IMO before going to create video we should write a script with what we >>> want to show in the video. Shall we write one, otherwise it may waisting >>> our effort. >>> >>> On Thu, Jun 11, 2015 at 9:29 PM, Lahiru Sandaruwan <[email protected]> >>> wrote: >>> >>>> Awesome stuff Sanjeev! >>>> >>>> Some points that can be improved, >>>> >>>> >>>> - Stratos can be identified as a PaaS framework, which can be used >>>> to build PaaSes, rather than a PaaS. >>>> - When explaining the bursting scenario, we can emphasise the >>>> advantage a bit more, >>>> >>>> We can scale out to a public cloud when the on-premise private cloud is >>>> fully utilized with bursting capability, which is a hybrid cloud scenario. >>>> >>>> - Cartridge agent only publishes memory consumption and load >>>> average, where load balancer(or LB extension) publishes the >>>> requests-in-flight >>>> - In metadata service description, we can go bit more into the >>>> details. We can say that metadata service allows cartridges of same >>>> application, to communicate each other >>>> >>>> Thanks. >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> On Thu, Jun 11, 2015 at 7:50 PM, Manula Thantriwatte < >>>> [email protected]> wrote: >>>> >>>>> Hi Sanjeev, >>>>> >>>>> Great work. This is very good for get the idea about Stratos and it's >>>>> architecture. >>>>> >>>>> Thanks ! >>>>> >>>>> On Thu, Jun 11, 2015 at 9:13 PM, Pubudu Gunatilaka <[email protected]> >>>>> wrote: >>>>> >>>>>> Hi Sanjeev, >>>>>> >>>>>> This is a very good initiative. As this is a descriptive video, it is >>>>>> good for new comers to get some idea on Apache Stratos. Great Work >>>>>> Sanjeev!!! >>>>>> >>>>>> Thank you! >>>>>> >>>>>> On Thu, Jun 11, 2015 at 5:29 PM, Sanjeev Niles <[email protected]> >>>>>> wrote: >>>>>> >>>>>>> Hi Devs >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I noticed that there aren't any videos which provide an introduction >>>>>>> and architectural overview of Apache Stratos. Hence I have created a >>>>>>> draft >>>>>>> of one and would like feedback from you. Link below: >>>>>>> https://youtu.be/6DYC8KJNYeo >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Please ignore the image quality as this is an initial draft. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Please review it and provide your feedback, so that any required >>>>>>> changes can be done. Hopefully after this, it could be included in the >>>>>>> documentation. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Best Regards >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Sanjeev Niles >>>>>>> Senior Instructor >>>>>>> WSO2 Inc. >>>>>>> lean.enterprise.middleware. >>>>>>> m: +94 777 814014 <%2B94%20773%20500185> >>>>>>> w: http://wso2.com >>>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> -- >>>>>> >>>>>> *Pubudu Gunatilaka* >>>>>> Software Engineer >>>>>> WSO2, Inc.: http://wso2.com >>>>>> lean.enterprise.middleware >>>>>> mobile: +94 77 4078049 >>>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> -- >>>>> Regards, >>>>> Manula Chathurika Thantriwatte >>>>> phone : (+65) 91306970 >>>>> email : [email protected] >>>>> Linkedin : *http://lk.linkedin.com/in/manulachathurika >>>>> <http://lk.linkedin.com/in/manulachathurika>* >>>>> blog : http://manulachathurika.blogspot.com/ >>>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> -- >>>> -- >>>> Lahiru Sandaruwan >>>> Committer and PMC member, Apache Stratos, >>>> Senior Software Engineer, >>>> WSO2 Inc., http://wso2.com >>>> lean.enterprise.middleware >>>> >>>> phone: +94773325954 >>>> email: [email protected] blog: http://lahiruwrites.blogspot.com/ >>>> linked-in: http://lk.linkedin.com/pub/lahiru-sandaruwan/16/153/146 >>>> >>>> >>> >>> >>> -- >>> Lakmal Warusawithana >>> Vice President, Apache Stratos >>> Director - Cloud Architecture; WSO2 Inc. >>> Mobile : +94714289692 >>> Blog : http://lakmalsview.blogspot.com/ >>> >>> >> > -- Imesh Gunaratne Senior Technical Lead, WSO2 Committer & PMC Member, Apache Stratos
