On 2020/04/02 9:07, Daniel Shahaf wrote: > Good morning futatuki@, <snip> > Thanks for this. May I propose a few tweaks? Patch attached, as well > as its wdiff for review purposes. The changes are mainly: > > - Use passive voice > > - Rearrange information to put the common case first and rarer cases > nearer the end > > Let me know if I missed anything. > > Furthermore, since this documentation is for 1.14.0, I assume it should > be backported to branches/1.14.x? If that is the case, feel free to go > ahead and add it to branches/1.14.x/STATUS. (You can automate editing > and committing the STATUS file by running «tools/dist/nominate.pl > r1876016 "hello world"» in a working copy of branches/1.14.x.)
Thank you very much for the review and guidance. Actually I intended to ask for correction/review my poor composition, but I ran out of steam before do it in this morning (actually morning in Japanese time zone). Now I've done them. Cheers, -- Yasuhito FUTATSUKI <futat...@yf.bsdclub.org> / <futat...@poem.co.jp>
